i liked this, you plan to continue it right?

this is one of the best zero sroies i have read! i ;ove how you put so much detail into it.^_^

Aw, I feel so sorry for everybody(except Nagisa and Ritsu)!

Mwe! You do the Zero boys justice!
Please update once you have the time! =^-^=

I was practically shaking, it's so intense yet adorable, truely what their characters inspire. A wonderful masterpiece you have here.

This is something I truly love. That cruel beauty of Zero, evil, yet so kind in some way.
Combine that to your wonderful writing style and Amb is on cloud nine.
Feedback is not my strongest point, true, but I may as well tell you to continue writing, since storyline is so moving.

Holy hell those two kids are creepy! But I love them to bits! I love your story too, it's fantastic and I can see everything happening as you described it... I especially love the teddy bear bit, it's just the opposite from what you'd expect from Natsuo and Youji and a fine contrast to their cruel selves...

Again, lovely work and I hope you update this... ^_^

- Woffy

^^ I liked the story and it was well developed. You captured their spirit nicely and you only had a few grammar mistakes. All in all this is one of the best Natsuo/Youji stories I have read. Please keep writing.

Please update (not to be pushy) but it think im dying of Yaoi withdrawls! Its good, its great i love this story!

Nice! yes, cute, (slightly sexual), psychologically engagin, and sadistic. Everything the Zero-pair is. I really liked the spell battle, i thought it was done excellently ^_^
This is such a cool story to read, i absolutely love the Zeroes, and going through their whole experience is awesome! I could just imagine them remembering all this and laughing about it. Great job~!

I really liked it, we all know zero are phsyco, but you make them sound a little human too, bravo!

omg i loved your story! Zero is my favorite! great job, please write another one like it!

That was sweet and cute. Weird fighting. It was awesome.

It's so good I love Natsuo and Youji
write more , I really want to read more
Good Job

It's so cute! and also kind of sad... Poor Zero fighters! Anyway, I really like this tory but it's kind of confusing ude to the '' marks. It makes everything they're saying look as if they are thinking it, and not saying it... But other then that, I really like this story and I hope you update it soon!