Aww, this is cute! And I appreciate the bullies getting what was coming to them because, Disneyland or not, we all come across the jealous jerk who wants to spoil our wonderful vacation memories.

loved it update soon

I loved this story T.J. It was nice to see that I was mentioned in your bio. You really do care! *projectile tearing.* Keep up the good writing!

IAmTheBoss

I think we have an "Aww..." moment! Everybody, on the count of three! One. Two!...THREE! "Aww..." That was cute. I've never seen anything like that. Little Phil. At least I can picture his voice, thanks to "Maybe Sitting." :) This has made me happy. Yea!

omg that story is so good lol plz keep writing it! PLEASE!

Aw w...im done now.

I like macaroni...

But I like cookies more. Ch.2? Please.

aww that was so cute! i loved it.

that was so adorable! please write more!

el cuaderno (aka notebook)

Yay! No one shot (pouts) MORE!

ah! i loved it! that was so cool! yay!

aw that was cute

Hallo! Friendly neighbourhood Moofiebeta here. D Yay I *love* this fic as I've already told you. Not because I got to read it before everyone else [although, of course, that's a major plus point] but because it's so cute and short but right to the point.

I love the cheese-head bit and the magic trick bit and the fact that they're still playing games with imaginary grenades when they're almost sixteen and the going-to-Disneyland bit and basically I have no complaints at all. I also love how your oneshots are actually one-shots and not bloody long stories with a few chapters just merged together.

This is going on my favourite stories list. Woots! I think I'll be reading s'more of your stories after reading the other updates on the site, especially the happier, cheerier ones [that means I'm going to be avoing Starry Night, heh]. And I'll be sending ya an e-mail soon. So 'till then, eh?

Ta!

All I can say is... squee. S-qu-e.

aw... that's so cute! great job :)