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| Shirohikari 2007-07-02 ch 2, | abusehey there((: love this fic! the starting, the progress, the vibe, the characters. all exceedingly adorable. and the whole hodgesgreg thing? -drool- thanks so much for writing this fic. |
| Morrigain 2006-01-22 ch 2, | abusehehe... great ficcy, just great. ^-^ |
| Minttown1 2005-10-23 ch 2, | abuseI love this story so very much. It's clever, and the interaction is wonderful. (Good luck with your college work woes. I hope they've cleared up some by now.) |
| NaughtyKittyKat 2005-10-03 ch 2, | abuseNice story. And Hodges' lines were very good. They were so...Hodges. |
| greggolover44 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abusesorry it may be a good story but never put greg with hodges. greg isn't gay and just no.not right. greg and hogdes?! what is this world coming to!? |
| Alyssa 2005-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved this story...specially the part about greg's hair...makes me wanna reach out and touch it myself! keep up the good work! |
| Caster 2005-09-29 ch 2, | abuseYou are a goddess, plain and simple. And yes, everything I write is part of an evil punishment to get up to update your stories; after all, your review for 'Decent Things' meant so much to me. LOL! ^_^ When I saw that you updated this, I proceeded to jump off my chair, bellow "SHE UPDATED!" throughout the house, and then refuse to tear my eyes away from the screen until I soaked in each and every word. Your banter is just *amazing*! And gracious, Greg drooling on his pillow and the way David accused him of it while Sara was on the phone... pirceless. I. Love. You. No, seriously. I'll give you a couple of weeks off to finish up your homework (Like we can ever really "finish" college homework. *sighs*) but then I'd better see some figurative tackling of Nick and Archie or I'll send a Nerf dart your way- and don't you think I won't! *waves plastic Nerf gun threateningly* Write on, Ms. Penny, lest I use my lamination machine for evil purposes! I LOVE THIS STORY! *coughs* I'm okay now. |
| lennonislove 2005-09-28 ch 2, | abuseOh my God. . . I think you killed me. With such slash yumminess as I have not seen. Well, much anyway. You're amazing. Please start writing some of those other stories "stewing in your brain". Soon. Or I'll go crazy. |
| Electra 2005-09-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseHilarious! Formidably written and so lively before my eyes, I could nearly see them. Is there a small chance of more stories with the Dynamic Duo? (Sorry, but it was you who used the phrase "Batman-esque at first!) I like the Greg/David-pairing so much! Love, Electra |
| lennonislove 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. Oh wow. Oh wow. ::takes a second to gather thoughts:: Oh wow. That was so cute. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! Your writing style is so endearing. . . you could be writing Sara/Doc Robbins and I would still be hooked. Okay, maybe it helped that this was about my two favorite characters. Maybe a little. Still, you are awesome. My hero even. :-P |
| A lilmatchgirl 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuselol. This is hilarious. Continue, please! XD |
| Flash Foreward 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It made me laugh, a lot. Please, finish it! |
| Designation 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that was just one of the most hilarious lines I've ever read in my life. I mean, maybe I'm just tired ('cause I AM tired), but are those tears of laughter in my eye? Oh, and on a more general note, really great fic. Looking forward to more. |
| Caster 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE it! Wow, Pen, you're amazing with the Hodges snark and humor! “Hodges, is this a death threat?” “Nope, it’s a birthday card from my mother.” “Does she usually say, ‘I will kill you, you piece of **?’” Greg turned white-ish. “Is Grissom trying to set us up?” “Well, yes. Only, I couldn’t find the candles or the champagne, so you’ll have to live with a broken window and a death threat.” And the Nerf dart! And laminated death threat! Good Lord, you're a genius. Please please PLEASE (don't make me plead. No, this isn't pleading. It's merely begging.) find it within your heart to write chapter two. You must, for the good of -um- everyone! LOVED IT! ^_^ |
| Tinagal0209 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abusePlease tell me when the second is done. The suspense is killing me! I like Greg in this story. He is hilarious. Please if you have the time, give some feedback on mine. Its called "Always Remember to Flush." Thanks again |