Well, the chapters are DEFINITELY too long . . . and I think Zelda fics have gone downhill in popularity. I know I read less of them; maybe other people do, too.

I like this chapter. Aaron seems MUCH less freakish, and Ian is likeable, too. I hope you give him more time in this fic, because he's cool.

I miss Will and Rosie, though. And Daphnes -- he was barely in this one!

But at least the plot's moving forward now. That's always a good sign. Way to go, stupid king. Hopefully Daphnes will be able to smooth this over.

I love it! It is so amazing! please keep continuing!

NEW CHAPTER!
Yay.
I like Ian a lot. He needs a girlfriend. You should igve him a girlfriend. And a shave. He needs to kill that mustache.
Aaron . . . kinda freaks me out. I mean, if I met him, I'd be like, "Oh my God, what the hell is wrong with tihs guy?" He's talking about measuring APPLES! What is that about?!
It's gonna be fun watching you try to pair him up. Almost as fun as watching Daphnes try to . . . you know.
Nabooru and Ganondorf are very cutey-pants, too.
THE ROYAL SCRUBBERS! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *falls over laughing and dies*
. . . I'm dead.

Ok

Poor Daphey. . .his dads more messed up than he is. . .royal scrubbers (haha) i found that funny

Poor ganandorf. . .i was waiting for him to kiss her, (SOB) WHY DO YOU H AVE TO MAKE HIM SO NICE HE'S GOING TO BE EVIL ONE DAY EVIL and Naborou is gonna HATE him. . (tear)

Aaron.. . ♥♥ measuring apples.. . .poor obsessive guy. . .

I guess I should have logged in first. . . .but I didnt and it ill delete my review if I do. . .SO sorry

I LOVED IT

ok not to start to sound like amanda or any thing but why are he chapters so long ? i mean in the other stories you write you just leave off with a cliff hanger, would it kill you to do that in this story ? Well i guess ill keep reading any way.

Ok so i can tell you right now i dont like Daphines father or Zeldas father, hey are both so mean. And i aslso feel bad for Will, he is all by him self,its not fair. Oh and one more thing . . .what is up with the long chapters ? They just keep getting longer and longer, but i guess ill keep reading.

Well, im finally reiviewing you ! ! ! ! After all of these weeks i found time to and im glad i found time to reiveiew you becasue you story is really good so far. Cant wait for the next chapter ! ! !

This souns like it is going to to be a very earthy story ! ! ! !

Poor Will. And Daphnes. I love them both.
Cool chapter, even though it brought back health class thoughts...*twich*... anyway...bye!

hey! my review works now!
HAHAHHAA LOVE THE CHAPTER TITLE! it grabs the eye, definitely.
just some grammar issues, nothing terrible. nothing that takes away from the story. ThAnK gOd YoU dOn'T tYpE lIkE tHiS.
daphnes is adorable, and i loved his parents. and will! and rosie!
the zora part was a little slow . . . but i think that was just because i knew what hilarity was coming. ithink to an objective reader -- someone who had no clue where the "sex ed" part came in, that part would be more interesting.
night one . . . day one . . . night two . . . DAMMIT! hahahahahaha! funny.
two things i really liked (that i just noticed because i read several stories that did this):
1) you write out the words for numbers. you don't go, "the prince has 2 crowns." it's much more sophisticated. *claps*
2) you don't do that "as you know, daphnes blah blah blah." inserting things like that just removes the reader from the story. so THANK'EE!

hearts to daphnes!

Fisrt of all
I LOVE WILL

and then “Um . . . yeah . . .maybe . . .I think that’s it.”

“That is so ADORABLE!” She left her chair and went over to him. “You poor innocent baby!” she took Daphnes’ head and pressed it against her chest. “That’s so sweet that you’re putting her feelings before your own!”

“Rosie . . .what are you doing?” Will asked in a low voice

the favorietst part of all

Rosie is so cute
and awkward moment for Will
and WIll lying in bed next to Daphey, not the greatest idea .. . .

WIll I love you

and Rosie and Him make such a cute couple
udate soon

OK, so here I am reading it! Yay!
I love Daphnes and Orayo. BUt now they're alone. :( I love it. And I love the author's note at the end. That was cool! Yay!

I have a complaint, Ch 8 doesnt have a title, (^^) done complaining now for the REVIEW (drum role)

WHAT WHAT HAPENED?!??!!? WHAT WAS THE FIRE THING

IS ORAyo allive?!?!??! you can kill Daphey, it would make everything better for Zelda (jr) but but but but but

He was really cute in the begginnig, just to tell you, I felt like hugging him that pure little virgin (^^)

UPATE NOW PLEASE!

love it, as per usual. daphnes is so sweet and funny. i actually think this might be my favorite story. well, tied with help me, at least. b-e-a-utiful!
poor daphnes. he's so insane. he and zelda need to solve this "heir" problem (winks). i laugh so hysterically at the thought of you trying to write that. . . . ahaha. it's very amusing. there's lots of screaming and pacing. and you can't even draw a picture for inspiration . . . this is gonna be fun.

Hiya, I love this story, & i can't be arsed going all the way over there so I'll tell you how much I like your fictionpress story here too. I like it very muchly *nods vigorously*.

Now I'm not a proper writer, thus the not having a profile etcetera, but I figure I'll review so you don't track me down & hurt my pets. Your story's really well done in that (so far as I can tell) you've stayed true to the Zelda story & havn't done anything to breach canon, which make it more believable & whatnot. Also your spelling seems to be improving, & you've stopped neglecting to put a break in between changes of setting (that was annoying the hell out of me). You've also chosen an awesome story to write a fanfic on, zelda rocks. Anyhow, that's probably the best I can do, so I'll finish by begging you to post more chapters, both in this'n, & help me.

ja ne, Akushi.