I really enjoyed reading these! very well written

Damn 0 - 0 -filled with envy and awe- I wish I had your way with words. Lovely, though I found your use of paragraph style a bit awkward (and then again, I'm an odd reader XD).

Wow. As much as I liked the way you brought Makie to life, I like your Anotsu even better. Some gorgeous lines - "ink catches with blood under his fingernails" and Anotsu's recognition that blood will be the only thing that stains his nails caught my breath.
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"Always always crying - what a waste of water" - that one too.
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Awesome work.
~Sabriel.

That was a wonderful written work. :) You captured their essence in a most excellent way.

very nice concept. beautifully written with a raw and yet poetic feel to it. you've captured anotsu's character brilliantly in the narrative. great job ^__^

Nice. So pretty. And so introspective. I cannot write proper reviews.

This is beautifully written. Wonderful. It's been a long time since I've read a fic like this. *applaud*

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I like it--strong imagery and poetic phrases, and the whole "written in blood" motif that's so much a part of the manga. That's an interesting view on how Rin's crusade might end, and rather mysterious as well, since I'm not sure how she would have managed it. Maybe Manji had a hand in it?

You definitely improved this when I compare it to the version on your LJ; editing is half the game, IMO. :) Good work!