 TeamEdmundAndPeter 2009-11-27 . chapter 9more and what does comatose mean!? |
 someone 2009-06-12 . chapter 9 please write more! |
 XxXChrommagiaXxX 2009-01-11 . chapter 9please please please carry this on lol luvin it! |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 9*more dramatic music*...I'm waiting and watching 4 the baby 2 b Blake's...but Tori is like "I forgive u for raping me...just don't do it again"...WHO SAYS THAT?! O.o |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 8Oh my...this story is turing in2 a Soap Opera like...like..."Passions"...or...or...um..."Days of Our Lives"! I really like tha story...I hope Hunter isn't dead...a coma I could understand but not dead... |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 7*dramatic music in the background* who is the father...this tis perplexing...um...not 2 keep correcting u or anything but...um...like 8 paragraphes (or so) from the bottom u said Tori was "feeling well" and then she puked...idk bout u but usually when I feel well I don't puke... |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 6NO...DON'T CHANGE THE DEARLY DEPARTED THING FROM THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER! I ♥ THAT!XD |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 5This chapter made me laugh so hard...3 fricken times! LOL 2 THE MAXIMUM SQUARED! 1.) u said dearly DEPARTED...THAT IS SO FRICKEN AWSOME! THEY R ALL DEAD!!^^ No wait...that's not cool 4 some of the characters...2.) They r dancin @ the wedding...he is all like "I Love you" and it just seemes that she is all like "Guess what...I LOVE U 2!"...3.) They r down @ the beach and Tori is like "how bout round 2?" and then Hunter is all like "Why not? Let's Do It"! OMG LMAO! |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 4*peverted mind on*...again with those HOT, PASSIONATE, DREAMS! Kukukukuku!!XD*peverted mind off* |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 2*peverted mind on*...OH my...how dreams can get out of hand...kukukuku!^^...*peverted mind off*...AWSOME STORY! |
 female-otaku 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Wow...I gues that is what it means 2 b the ninja of water...lol^^...I LOVE the story!^^ PLZ continue it!^^ |
 Warrioroftheseventhstar 2008-06-21 . chapter 9I think you have forgotten this story. Revive it! |
 bloomsky 2008-05-21 . chapter 9MOre more more more more |
 Hot Pink Girl 2008-04-05 . chapter 9Hey why didn't you finish this story? it's really amazing please keep writing it I really want to know what happen |
 redforever 2007-11-21 . chapter 1I LOVE your story so far...keep going. |