I thought i should tell you that a write called Rebecca Collins has a series of novels out to buy in the shops and the first one is called The Pemberley Chronicles in case you think of sending it off to get printed.

Say what?!?! That whole last paragraph or whatever, just everything below the last horizontal line seemed very jumbled up and confusing...

Yay! Punctuation at the end of quotes!! =D

I'm liking this so far, but some of the quotes aren't spaced so it's hard to tell who's talking. And there's no punctuation at the end of all your quotes...other than that, I like it! =D I'm off to read the rest!

You clearly have no conception of a lenghthy chapter. These are without exception the shortest ones I have ever seen. I am not impressed.

THis is really good but you should make the chapters longer by adding more details. PMASAP

Oh sounds interesting! Georgiana might be a bit jealous!

It sounds interesting. I was a little surprised at 'Pemberley Chronicles' - it makes it look like an action story, something you wouldn't expect in the classics.

I was just browsing through Jane Austen Fanfiction about Lizzy and Mr. Darcy after their Marriage, and so I came to yours. I was very astonished to read in Chapter 6 a Dialoge in "German". Why is that?? Anyway, i am German too, and i can tell you, I could hardly get the meaning of your dialogue. If you will tell me what you meant in English, I can offer you to translate it.
And please explain why they are talking German!
The rest of your Story is quite nice, more like a screenplay sometimes. But i love just everything about Mr.and Mrs.Darcy.
Have you red the Gentleman trilogy of Pamela Aiden?
I can only recommend it.
Greetings from Germany
Tanja

aw, that was cute. :) loved it.

your story is a bit bland...maybe because there's no plot yet...however, do update, please. I have a feeling that your story will be great.

Excellent story, I really like your well written characters. This chapter is a bit mysterious - yes?.

Confusing chapter. It seemed to jump around alot. And the whole conversation in French, it would have been nice if you had translated. Otherwise it was a good chapter. Update soon!

What does that mean?

Albeit, my German isn't that good, but who is Faye and why is D'Monte asking Darcy what happened to her and he answering something about it not working out? I'm hoping this is talk about a cook or something and not a past lover. But, then why are they even speaking in German in the first place, if not to keep Elizabeth from understanding? So many questions and not enough story to answer them all ... more please.