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Andrew Joshua Talon 2008-08-15 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely done. I liked the introspection and the character interaction-You got them both really well, I think. Good work!
Vi 2008-06-06 ch 1, anon.	abuselove it! this is really good
KatsyKat 2008-01-16 ch 1,	abuseAww... that was so DARN precious! I don't see enough motherly Riza/Ed fics. Seriously that chick can do ANYTHING 10 times better than Mustang! ;) ...cept alchemy of course. Great Story - I loved especially that Riza not only gave advise but took some as well - going to see her mom and all. I love this aspect of Ed's character he inspires people to be better by his bravery and attitude.
Gyatso15 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseI put this on my favorites list a while ago, but I just reread it and realized that I hadn't reviewed. So I will now! I think this is a great story. The way you portrayed Ed and Riza's relationship was excellent, and the way Ed went back to normal, with the private and all, was very nice. I love this!!
WhiteWolfKitsune 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseOmgOmgOmg! Everytime I read this i nearly end up in tears! Its just so cute to see Ed and Riza acting like that; its almost like a brother-and-sister heart-to-heart talk. Its so warming! This so one of my favourites! Its beautifully written, very desciptive, and the bit at the end with Mustang being envious of Riza and the flowers is awsome XD Keep writing! Whitewolfkitsune
Shadow Mage Evelyn 2007-04-16 ch 1,	abuse^_^ Aw~! That is too sweet!! I love this story. You know...I've really never thought about Riza and Ed's relationship like that before. That's really something you've got there, and again, I think your language is beautiful. Thanks for writing this one!!
EagleBlaze954 2007-02-27 ch 1,	abuseGood story :-). I absolutely love angst stories, especially ones that involve Ed. That was really nice of Riza to comfort him and Roys jealousy over Ed giving Riza flowers was funny, lol. Keep up the very good work! EagleBlazw
peachtarts 2007-02-05 ch 1,	abuseTHAT WAS SO CUTE. ♥ I loved the ending, with Riza getting flowers from Edward. That's so sad~ & adorable~ & everything's so perfect! flail
Anti-Logic 2006-12-22 ch 1,	abuseAw, that is so incredibly sweet! Riza love!
Roy-Fan-33 2006-10-03 ch 1,	abuseAW! hugs Riza and Ed That was soo sweet. Just lovely! I think I'll fav! ;D -kay
MilesTailsPrower-007 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseD'aw. :) Riza reminded me of a big sisterly figure or something, which is interesting, because Roy almost seems like a rough vague older brother figure to Ed who knocks some "reality" into him when he needs it. And my, Roy is observant! Hahaha! Ah, well-- I guess she'll never tell him the whole story. RIZA: I was comforting Ed, and uh... yeah. :\| ROY: I see. I'll pretend flowers have something to do with friendly talks. >:\| Kind gesture, anyway. :P Well done! Your writing style is nice! Although, some of the character actions were fitted together with the other character's dialogue, which made it look like Ed said something Riza said one or twice. But it's still very nice! Not cliche, either, because I've never seen one like this before. Worry not! Take care. :)
Yami Arow 2006-09-13 ch 1,	abuseAW! I love this hugs Lil Ed hugs You made me cry! sniffle I miss my mom! AW! Aino Ná Arowanna
LILI 2006-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseBeautiful! Very deep, very sweet! I'd love to read more interraction between the Elric's and Hawkeye!
Magic-Noise 2006-08-07 ch 1,	abuseCute. Not bad at all. Not even out of character really...an unusual situation that isn't really explored much, but not bad at all. [grins] Very good. ^^
Feyrae 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseOh, /no/. You've killed me again. xD I found one mistake this time, though! holds up one finger triumphantly It should be maternal, not paternal, I believe. >.> Not much, but it's /something/. This was heartbreakingly sweet, and I adored that you mentioned that his defense was anger, because that's what I always felt. The part with Al wanting to go, and Ed refusing seems so real to me. Great job.

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