Great Job! The wording really made it interesting, loved how you told it too. Nice point of view, and good story!

Luffy is soo cute that sometime you just want to cuddle him...haha..go NamiXD

Funny! Lovely! Sweet!

You know, that was just kind of nice. Surprising language and wording kept me from wandering away. Great job!

cool i like this story

i tink this was very good

I've never read anything so romantic in my life. *sigh* This story sparkles so much, and Luffy saying "you're perfect except when you get mad and hit me" is spot on!

8.5/10

You've been added to the "Pirate King, Pirate Queen" C2 list! ;)

love the one-shots!

That read like a black and white 1950's detective movie.

Like a bullet through my eyes, it hit me where it counts xD
I totally loved it. Fast paced. Chopped. And interesting. Definately an a+ for you girly. HUGZ!!

Mouse

That was really, really sweet!

cute

Hehe. I loved it, really cute. I'm looking forward to more of your work. ^^

WONDRFUL! A MASTERPIECE OF THE LUFFY/NAMI! I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK LATER ON, MY FRIEND.

(bangs head on keyboard) THTA WAS SO FREAKING WONDERFUL! AGH! I've seriously never read anything lik,e it! Totally beautiful, romantic, coarse, and kinda funny! DAMN, that was great...you and this story are going into faves! Keep it up! ^.^

I love it ^^ its so sweet!

LuffyxNami is the cutest thing ever x3 make you feel all fuzzy..

LuNami forever