Very nice! One of the best Alexander story's I have read so far. Very excited for the next chapter! Again, very good work!

An interesting Story Welldone :)

I'm delighted to see the next chapter is here! I like the way you've woven your own story into the film events; Alexander's unhappiness both at the tension between himself and his father and at Philip's assassination, while everyone else is celebrating, is beautifully portrayed. Now... when are he and Hephaestion going to declare their true feelings? And is Ptolemy going to use it to his advantage after all?

Holy crap. That was a wonderful update. your descriptions are vivid and wonderful. This is perhaps one of your best chapters ever. Wonderful. I wish I could say more but I just get this overwhelming feeling from this chapter, and I can only say how wonderful it was!

Hear from you soon!

~Baliansword

I'm really sorry you haven't continued with this story as I love the way you write and the love and the uncertainty between A & H was beautifully portrayed. It was also nice to have a more sympathetic treatment of Olympias for once - and for Ptolemy not to necessarily be completely honourable, as the real person does seem to be a bit dodgey. Sorry I didn't review this earlier,I actually thought I had but there's no review showing for me so perhaps not! The real irritation is that this story doesn't seem to show on the main searches which might mean it's not getting seen enough!

Please carry on!

Absolutely enjoyed your work. I hope that you will continue to write. I think what I like the most is the relationship building between Alexander and Hephaestion. However, I like how you write for Olympias. I like the fact that you are using her in your tale.

Please continue, can't wait to see what you do next. Awaiting the next chapter-

~Baliansword

empress of whispers, i love this fic! update update update please please please!!

That wasn't to fluffy. Looking forward to seeing where you will take this.