Reviews for Neon Genesis: Mortal

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Neferius 2008-05-26 ch 6,	abuseWhat part does Sentaro play in future stories? It seems interesting. As for what happened to Asuka. I'm very curious. Read ya Later.
Zoro50 2007-11-09 ch 6,	abuseAlright I really really liked the concept of this one. There's just one thing. It should have been much longer. Especially with the part that had Sentaro angsty and angry on Terra-2. Maybe also a hint of what Sentaro would become before he got to heaven. It just seemed to easy a fix for everything to suddenly be fixed after he came out of Ygrdassil. Still it was a fun read. Also Shinji X Mana = major win
Kotetsu 117 2007-05-29 ch 5,	abuseThis is great.
Kotetsu 117 2007-05-24 ch 6,	abuseok?
Anexsis Hirotomi 2005-09-30 ch 6,	abuseNO! Asuka's dead?! Why? Who did it I'll kill 'em! And Mana's Queen of Hell?! What is this world comming to?! I guess youre gonna tell us in your next fic right? right?...hears no responce RIGHT?! still no responce PLEASE TELL US! Well till you do I shall cry myself to sleep, oh how I loved Asuka... ja-ne...goes off to cry p.s-what happens to immortals when they die? I've always wondered that.
Anexsis Hirotomi 2005-09-30 ch 5,	abuseEw...hee hee. Well all's good in the world. well every thing but those two evil thingies...I guess I’m off to read the next chappie… JA-NE!
Marcos Edson 2005-09-26 ch 6,	abuseChapter 5: Nice, I'd like to have seen a little more, as Sentaro said it was kinda "easy" and everything ended too fast, we didn't even get to see Kensuke... Fun chapter ending, too... :) Cahpter 6: Aw, you just broke me down! I'm looking forward to see what will lead to these events (and even wondering if they will still be the same at the end) but I must admit that stories which start in the future and then flahsbacks are a bit of a turn off.
Marcos Edson 2005-09-26 ch 4,	abuseI was kinda predicting the "happy family reunion" at the beginning, poor Sentaro... This chapter remembered me of an old movie, I think it was called "Dreamscape", about a guy with the ability to enter one's dream and help with fixing a problem, I wonder what will cost Sentaro to help his mother...
Barricade 2005-09-26 ch 6,	abuseOkay that came from way left field. Talk about a shocker about how you're headed, especially considering you're a massive Asuka fan. But then, a bit of angst is good for the soul at times (although Shinji has just a tad bit too much at times). Looks like at least two ppl are out of the way either through death, or something else. And I think I see where Sentaro is headed as well as he's been influenced now by one of all the races (demon, god, angel, and man), and even Yggdrasil has played a slight part as well. And I don't think its Sayoko that disappears either beyond Hild.
Bobboky 2005-09-26 ch 6,	abusevery nice
Miroku-dono 2005-09-25 ch 6,	abuseWell at least Sentaro figured out his role in why Kami-sama wanted him a mortal. And as for Asuka...No. I have a feeling we're going to figure out why she's gone pretty soon. I hate to say this Slayer, but you're getting a little predictable. Guess that's what happens when someone reads anothers work for so long =P
Anexsis Hirotomi 2005-09-21 ch 4,	abuseWoah! Well what can I say? Besides that I can't wait till the next chappie! Sayoko seems to spend at least some time unconscious in every story, at least I know that I'm not the only one who does that. (have a character unconsious or injured constantly)Oh yeah I'm changing my user name to Anexis if you couldn't figure that out. JA-NE!
Barricade 2005-09-20 ch 4,	abuseHmm, I'm really starting to suspect that Sentaro is NOT a mere mortal. Mortal yes. AVERAGE Mortal? No. I'm still hoping my little theory on that Sayoko's human 1/2 was affected after all by being inside the EVA, just like Asuka/Shinji/Touji (almost forgot...Kensuke was in EVA-01 for a bit too for about 5 minutes). As for Arael - love it. Outside of Sayoko & Mana she's my top favorite character. Never can have enough of her in the series, and she really deserves more scene time. And for her to basically get a lot of lines in a chapter is wonderful. Pity Sentaro is 'semi' hooked with Megami (have to admit that when you first introduced Mana that I was wondering if she'd end up with him later on, just for the sheer chaos it would cause).
Bobboky 2005-09-18 ch 4,	abusenice
Miroku-dono 2005-09-18 ch 4,	abuseSo now we find out what Sentaro's "greater purpose" is. Born mortal to save the universe...sounds hard. Hope to see you continue this Slayer, I really enjoy reading your works.

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