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broomstick flyer
2009-11-02 . chapter 8
Its official this writer is a nut. I dont know what money they use so I'll use american coins, and if anyone in Britain dialed 911 they would grow a beard longer than dumbledore while waiting for it to even ring. Use your little mouse thing and check up on the net to find out things.
broomstick flyer
2009-11-02 . chapter 7
Ok I just read this chap... er paragraph. It is not often that I write a review that could be construed as a flame but I have to say this writer is an utter and complete idiot, stupid beyond belief. Two magical people with wands that could easily kill a muggle with nothing more than a few words and according to this fool writer they do nothing what so ever to save Hermione's mother from possibly being shot by a loony. This writer should do herself a favour, instead of leaving this on the web she should remove it so far fewer people will think her idiotic.
broomstick flyer
2009-11-02 . chapter 4
I am reading this a long time after it was completed, I have to say that this author is an odd one in the way she portrays Harry as the defeater of Voldy and yet he stands by and allows his best 'friend a female' get beat up with out doing anything about it. I have to wonder what kind of life this person had to think that a seventeen or eighteen year old fit wizard would allow it to happen. I think it a stupid premise and rather a derogatory representation of Harry Potter.
Icetail
2009-09-23 . chapter 10
Nice fic! :D Its Cloudsong from CS by the way :P (I post a lot on the forum games)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this fic very much :D Great job!
Neko4
2009-09-21 . chapter 10
so is her mother dead or alive
penandpencil
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
This is quite beautifully written, and not just because you seem to have respect for the English language.
ThReE AqUiLa
2009-08-10 . chapter 10
Great fic!
very meaningful
i love the happy ending
freakysoccergirl
2009-01-26 . chapter 10
i really liked it
:)
FriedButterfliesanPeanutButter
2008-05-28 . chapter 10
OMG this story is sad but yet fluffy at times. It's the perfect combination and I really really enjoyed it. (I now also like the song that goes with this story...)
AnImEandMaNgAoBsEsSeD
2008-03-01 . chapter 10
Wow. This story was very touching. And very sad. I loved it! MAKE A SEQUAL! please?
AlbinoMonkeyC
2007-10-01 . chapter 7
I have read this I don't know how many time and it still makes me cry!
Lisa
2007-05-10 . chapter 10
Oh so wonderful! Brilliant! You should be a writer, or are you already? im still an H/R fan tho ... but i still loved it! i love these kind of stories! Thank you so much for posting these!

And what can be improved is putting more detail into things. Just look at the way jkr does it. You will learn alot from her! Well good luck! And very good job!
skyrider4300
2007-04-06 . chapter 3
Very good story, but why couldn't Hermione or Harmony call the police on Harley.He could get years in jail for doing that to them.
anabell-lee26692
2007-03-20 . chapter 4
is it harry?
GreyAB
2007-03-13 . chapter 10
very nice ending to this story.
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