Great story. And now Specters makes A LOT more sense. But now I have to go finish reading it.

This chapter is win. the improvement from Pavillions is unmearsurable. Amazing story. Awesome chapter. I love your bad guy. Just wow.

I would have appreciated at least some lip service for Rodney's trauma, but since you covered that in the sequel I'll let it go. Great story. (gross though :)

That was awesome! Had the rollercoaster, had the laughs, had the chew-on-the-fingernail moments, had the holy-crap-I-can't-believe-she-did-that moments that kept my smart-assed comments down to a minimum and had me enthralled.

Yee haw! Great story!

>>I make a good team.

You are wicked. Wicked, wicked, wicked!

Can you tell I'm enjoying this?

>>Ingesting sustenance through the mouth- disgusting.

Yeah, another person in Rodney's head. At least this one won't be *kissing* anyone. Heh.

Awesome story, really liked all the whump. Read both pavillion and this one and enjoyed the little prank pulled by Sheppard thanks for including it. Great stories on both accounts, you had me on the edge of the computer chair the entire time.

Okay, typo nitpicker here once more! :-p

"Their dead..." Nope, nope, nope! :) Wrong version of the word there. This is one of those things that I have been trying for years to hammer into another stubborn fanficcer.

There/They're/Their is one of those errors I see the most when writing (even my own at times!) There = place. They're = They are. Their = belongs to them. So... since you didn't have a verb in that sentence, you were needing They're. :) Does that make sense? :)

(And, if you think I'm bad - you should see what my friends with the English degrees do to my stuff when I get it back from their beta reading! I'm very mild, because it's been so long since I've studied the ultra conflicting rules of modern English. *g*)

Well, that was an interesting read. I liked it, although you kind of skimped on the characters' reactions to everything, and everyone was slightly OOC. I did like it, though.

Nice story! Of course Rodney managed to save Sheppard at the end ... *grin*

“Are we cool Colonel?”
“No, I’m cool. We will be fine.”

LOL!

Did I ever leave a review for this? In some other chapter? IF I didn't, bad me! It's too deserving not get one.

Great story! Please continue with this "series" I loved Pavilions as well :)

WOOHOO! LOL! WHAT A WAY TO GET BACK A WEIR!! LOL! Aw, everyone is back together again! *dances* Thanks for the great read!!