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2007-03-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseNot bad, but you might like to work on it a little bit more.
Joshah
2006-04-17
ch 1, anon.
abuse*hahahahahaha*
that was hilarious!poor Delsus.that was a great side story!If your going to make more fics please tell me.
cjm
2006-04-13
ch 1, anon.
abusethats so cute! i love this game and this is a cute side story ^_^
Kusabi Makabe
2006-03-26
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! I love Norn so much; she should be the queen of the world. Except then she'd starve everybody. Eh, well...good fic!
Erin Elric
2006-03-21
ch 1,
abuse*luaghes* Funny very funny. Giving Norn catnip *laughes*
ChibiRaccoon
2005-11-27
ch 1,
abusethat was great. I loved it.
Atelier fan
2005-11-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt seems like it came out of the game... beautiful.
Tsekura Kentetsu
2005-10-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat is freakin' hilarious! I love it! Norn is so cool! She's my favorite character! Will this continue at all? If not, oh well, i still love it!
tarnthedarkknight
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseOMG! This was so funny! Dude, you rock! I love the story! My favorite was the "my precious" part! Keep writing!
Diana Artemis Irving
2005-09-22
ch 1,
abuseCool story, it made me laugh!^^ Are you going to be putting up more chapters? 'Cuz if you are, be sure to tell me!!^_^
lil-creator
2005-09-12
ch 1,
abuseYAY! BLAME DELSUS! nice story anywayz
Griffinkhan
2005-09-03
ch 1,
abuse*dies laughing*

That was highly amusing, Omni. Thank you so much for writing it. XD

Poor Delsus... he never gets a break, does he?
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