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| ... 2007-03-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad, but you might like to work on it a little bit more. |
| Joshah 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse*hahahahahaha* that was hilarious!poor Delsus.that was a great side story!If your going to make more fics please tell me. |
| cjm 2006-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethats so cute! i love this game and this is a cute side story ^_^ |
| Kusabi Makabe 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! I love Norn so much; she should be the queen of the world. Except then she'd starve everybody. Eh, well...good fic! |
| Erin Elric 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuse*luaghes* Funny very funny. Giving Norn catnip *laughes* |
| ChibiRaccoon 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abusethat was great. I loved it. |
| Atelier fan 2005-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt seems like it came out of the game... beautiful. |
| Tsekura Kentetsu 2005-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is freakin' hilarious! I love it! Norn is so cool! She's my favorite character! Will this continue at all? If not, oh well, i still love it! |
| tarnthedarkknight 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This was so funny! Dude, you rock! I love the story! My favorite was the "my precious" part! Keep writing! |
| Diana Artemis Irving 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseCool story, it made me laugh!^^ Are you going to be putting up more chapters? 'Cuz if you are, be sure to tell me!!^_^ |
| lil-creator 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseYAY! BLAME DELSUS! nice story anywayz |
| Griffinkhan 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abuse*dies laughing* That was highly amusing, Omni. Thank you so much for writing it. XD Poor Delsus... he never gets a break, does he? |