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Reviews For: One Cold Night

Apple-Aipom
2002-12-15
ch 1,
abuseAwwies! Sweetness! ^-^ **AAML forever** Wheee!
Davy, soon to be an author ...
2002-11-05
ch 1, anon.
abuse"One cold night,
as I lay my fire
a voice behind me said,
'you killed my son
three years ago
and now I'll see you dead'
I spun and dropped my finger,
but I drew to no avail,
his bullet marked the ending
of my desperado trail"
sorry, couldn't resist. I LOVE AAML! Keep up thegood work!
Adriana Chan
2002-07-30
ch 1,
abuseawww it was so cute!!! weren't their probs solved a little quickly though?? oh well i liked it none the less!! keep writing
Glenn the Swordsman
2002-05-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseI thought that was a great story.
Although,...... Okay one word:
SENTENCE STRUCTURE!
I mean really: Ashiloveyoutoo..........
Ever heard of spacing?
Ketchum
2002-01-08
ch 1,
abusethat was cute! good job! yay!
568
2001-10-12
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat story keep it up
~*~MAnda~*~
2001-06-02
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat!! one of the best i've read so far!!!! keep up the good work!!^_^ AAML 4eva!!
Mewberries
2001-04-17
ch 1,
abuseThat wasn't bad at all! I liked it! AAML 4 ever! ^_^
BookkeeperBrooke(not signed...
2001-04-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery good for your first fic.( we all go through it)
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