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NikkiRubio101
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
D= it was sad but still good =/
Fake Bliss
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
Sweetly sad.
Bag o' Moon Frogs
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
You made me cry! Good job. This is intensely sad, but also intensly good!
Kuzosama
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
And he is the only one to cry? D: Naruto!?
BlackSilkSwan
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
That is such a sad story.
Raineko
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
Aw. That's so sad!
Teruame
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
One of the few in-character Hinata fanfics out there. -two thumbs up- Unfortunate, because most of the Hinata fandom isn't too keen on portraying her in ways that make us all think. -_-

I love how ya split this story into three parts (hence the title)...and such lovely words for a lovely fanfic! It's one of the things I envy about good writers, and it's something I hope to learn from.

Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I rarely have the time to say much to the author, so often I end up saving the fanfic without leaving a review that says more than "good".
Aufera
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
So good. I'm quite stunned actually at how good this is, so I'm sorry that I can't write a lenghty review.
Roses of Sharon
2008-01-23 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. I really like your representation of Hinata, though I think you tend to vilify Hanabi. But maybe she deserves it. And I don't really like that you think Hinata so pathetic. But whatever, still good writing, yeah?
jHeyTTernallie
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
so sad... but really beautiful! love the way how you portrayed things!
IceAndWhite
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
this was really sad. I liked how the way the POV were tied together, really brought out the story
MidnightWhisper7
2007-06-29 . chapter 1
My thoughts have effectively scrambled. Although the Hyuuga may be a fictional family, their traditions and beliefs and values make me more mad and sad than any other element in fiction. Many of the Naruto characters have sad pasts, but I think Hinata has one of the worst situations. A father who sees no worth in her and a cousin who until recently despised her. She's spent her whole life just trying to feel some kind of value in herself.

The last line made me tear up. I think Hinata finally finds the respect and love she needs with her team. (She practically has them wrapped around her finger).

I personally love the relationship between Hinata, Kiba, and Shino. I'm glad that was included here, although the image of Kiba crying just feels wrong.

Still, a very heartwrenching story, and well-written.
Trespasser1307
2007-04-27 . chapter 1
Wow. Your beginning parts completely had me going. I thought it'd have a happy-ish ending. Then again, that's what I get for having such a bad memory that I forgot that the story's genre was angst. I still loved the angst, though. XD
HannahSakura.Pinoy
2007-04-09 . chapter 1
Really good
causeiambetta
2007-03-01 . chapter 1
wow...didn't see that comming. thought one of the perspectives would be positive. just, damn. kinda speechless. dark, creative and well written. great great read
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