 NikkiRubio101 2009-11-13 . chapter 1D= it was sad but still good =/ |
 Fake Bliss 2009-10-21 . chapter 1Sweetly sad. |
 Bag o' Moon Frogs 2009-01-12 . chapter 1You made me cry! Good job. This is intensely sad, but also intensly good! |
 Kuzosama 2009-01-09 . chapter 1And he is the only one to cry? D: Naruto!? |
 BlackSilkSwan 2009-01-07 . chapter 1That is such a sad story. |
 Raineko 2008-11-23 . chapter 1Aw. That's so sad! |
 Teruame 2008-03-03 . chapter 1One of the few in-character Hinata fanfics out there. -two thumbs up- Unfortunate, because most of the Hinata fandom isn't too keen on portraying her in ways that make us all think. -_-
I love how ya split this story into three parts (hence the title)...and such lovely words for a lovely fanfic! It's one of the things I envy about good writers, and it's something I hope to learn from.
Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I rarely have the time to say much to the author, so often I end up saving the fanfic without leaving a review that says more than "good". |
 Aufera 2008-02-28 . chapter 1So good. I'm quite stunned actually at how good this is, so I'm sorry that I can't write a lenghty review. |
 Roses of Sharon 2008-01-23 . chapter 1Oh, wow. I really like your representation of Hinata, though I think you tend to vilify Hanabi. But maybe she deserves it. And I don't really like that you think Hinata so pathetic. But whatever, still good writing, yeah? |
 jHeyTTernallie 2007-07-30 . chapter 1so sad... but really beautiful! love the way how you portrayed things! |
 IceAndWhite 2007-07-02 . chapter 1this was really sad. I liked how the way the POV were tied together, really brought out the story |
 MidnightWhisper7 2007-06-29 . chapter 1My thoughts have effectively scrambled. Although the Hyuuga may be a fictional family, their traditions and beliefs and values make me more mad and sad than any other element in fiction. Many of the Naruto characters have sad pasts, but I think Hinata has one of the worst situations. A father who sees no worth in her and a cousin who until recently despised her. She's spent her whole life just trying to feel some kind of value in herself.
The last line made me tear up. I think Hinata finally finds the respect and love she needs with her team. (She practically has them wrapped around her finger).
I personally love the relationship between Hinata, Kiba, and Shino. I'm glad that was included here, although the image of Kiba crying just feels wrong.
Still, a very heartwrenching story, and well-written. |
 Trespasser1307 2007-04-27 . chapter 1Wow. Your beginning parts completely had me going. I thought it'd have a happy-ish ending. Then again, that's what I get for having such a bad memory that I forgot that the story's genre was angst. I still loved the angst, though. XD |
 HannahSakura.Pinoy 2007-04-09 . chapter 1Really good |
 causeiambetta 2007-03-01 . chapter 1wow...didn't see that comming. thought one of the perspectives would be positive. just, damn. kinda speechless. dark, creative and well written. great great read |