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This was a wonderful story that was well written and a joy to read. Thanks.

A lot of people have secrets in their past that they want to keep hidden...

True victims always stayed trapped in the moment of their abuse, unable to escape the painful memories, but survivors found a way to work through those memories and keep living their lives.

hm... am i sensing some dual meaning to these lines? or am i just trying too hard ? :)

very nice first multi-chapter effort - i look forward to the next one!

A great ending to an awesome fic. I loved this, and I liked the relationship between Emily and Nick, and for your first multi-chapter fic it was great!

Thanks for a great story. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

Well, you're done. It was nice to see you complete your first multi-chapter fic, and it was a nice tense thrill ride. I know your aim it show Nick's inner strength and you did so with ease. You also represented his great mind, charm, and why we all love him.

I liked your Emiliy, her courage and abuilty to over come, just like our faorite CSI. And the tidbits with Grissom, the contuation of the peer to mentor realationship was spot on.

Great job.

Kristen

good chapter

hope nick is okay

cant wait for you to update

"Emily tried to snuggle closer to him in order to provide a bit more warmth." warmth...right... (hee)

aww- Nick the White Hat saves the day! bloodied but not beaten - and the Black Hat bought it!

very nice - sad it appears to be drawing to a close

liked the way that Grissom was confronted with having to comfort an hysterical female- LOL - now that's a picture!

Wow...another great chapter. I was at the edge of my seat. I love the way you had her asking Nick questions to keep him awake. I can't wait to see what you plan with Nick and Emily's relationship. Update soon please!

Again, another powerhouse chapter, that had me on the edge of my seat desperate to know how it would all end. Liked the way Emily tried to force Nick away with inane questions until Grissom arrived. And then you made my top lip quiver again with poor Emily breaking down at the end - it was just so real. Great stuff.

Oh man,great chapter! :)

Wow. I've only just found this story and it is very good. Keep writing. Hope they find Nick & Emily soon so Nick can get the medical attention he needs.

Great story.

*sniffle*

I LOVE this story. An awesome climax!

I hope it isn't done, it's a really interesting story. If it is done, you should write another nick centric story, you're a really good author.

What a chapter! You've left me breathless with all the excitement delivered on the page. Awesome stuff. At least Richard has got his comeuppance - I hope!