Supose since it's been a while this may be a dead project, but just in case it isn't: This is a good story. I'd really like to see where it goes.

I just have one question...Walimer!?

lmao that was greaT! "Walimer?"
hahahaha!!

How many bruises is jack gonna have once Sasha's through with him? ^_~

oh god, this is so funny. Walimer, isn't that a British name or somethin, i always thought that Jack was from America. anyways, this is so good! you seriously need to update!

Its a nice start, I hope you keep it up.

Have fun and enjoy thyself, Michael S

love it! cant wait for more!