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jitsufreek
2006-07-05
ch 3,
abuse*applauds* Frikken hilarious as always!! And thanks for dedicating the chapter to me!! ^_^

Keep it up!

jitsufreek
AJers
2006-07-04
ch 3,
abuseI'm sorry... I just have to put your ego down a bit...

First off, the coffee? Ingenious, such a random everyday thing which voldemort can look like an idiot by acting like it's different, stupid dolt.
Secondly, Dumbledore and his lemon drops... O_o Obvious, yet something I never thought of, but you spilled his secret... now watch him go into a decline..
And Last... well, no surprise that Snape wants Lily, she's gorgeous, duh? Plus, her compared to Bella? No brainer...
SonokoTao
2006-07-04
ch 3,
abuseLol I knew it! I knew it was the Lemon drops! Ha! In your face Hitomi! Now hand it %

Hitomi:*Pouts* Fine! Take it! *hands Laura a photo* not like i dont have another one...

*looks at photo blushing* Kakashi-sama...!

Dirty humor, gotta love it. XD
Alex the Anachronistic
2006-07-04
ch 3,
abuseHey, wow, this is great! Just tell me, what's an update list? Cause I'll definitely put you on my own. And no, I didn't think this was abandoned; I discovered chapter 3 a few days ago. Well keep writing! I loved the part with Snape and Siegmund ahahah...
Alex the Anachronistic
2006-07-01
ch 2,
abuseheheh! tickling charm...ahahah that's gold...

i noticed you had a tad bit o' trouble with the italics

you want to put < > around the i's. ja, that's all i have to say.

oh ya, good job! i like your hp fics, you need to write more
Alex the Anachronistic
2006-07-01
ch 1,
abuse*laughing hysterically* amazing what one can do with words, is it not?

i love this...since it involves snape i'm adding it to moi c2
AJers
2006-01-04
ch 2,
abusehmm, Chapter 2, and Bella's insane...but we have always known that. Plus, she's old. *waits for the crucio* BUT! moving on...even though most of the chapter focused on Bella... lol, I love how you twist the characters, adding a humorous taint to it. HOWEVER, I must admit I was surprised that Voldie actually showed some brains...I mean... looking at the previous chapter and the beginning of this one I seriously underestimated him AND his ability. Although, I may have underestimated Snape too. The wall is scared, the wall is very scared. :P ~Weny.
Sir Chris
2006-01-04
ch 1,
abuseYay someone flamed my work, ^_^.

You will be glad to know chapter 2 is almost finished and is on the way soon, Ms. Fanfic judge!

- Chris
Courtney
2006-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI am sorry to say that your story brings shame to fan fiction . net. Can you plese log out and never come back. You bring shame to my favorite website. This story is so boring that I fell alseep. If you were a true harry potter this story would not be so crapy. Even harry ptter is holding his head down in pain and agony.If I were you stop this pain your causing to everybody who read this story,and just stop writing forever.

*fanfic judge
Jason
2005-09-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseRahh, I had a good laugh. Then I read your pet peeve and I laughed again. Every time I hear Death Eaters now I'm gonna revert back to Death Munchers and
"BUT I DON'T WANT EATERS! I WANT MUNCHERS!" Voldemort was now simply whining.

I can just picture myself reading book 7, and geting to a serious part and cracking up, because of that now. and then how everyone will look at me odd and be like wtf mate!
anyhow haha rather enjoyable.
AceGray
2005-09-04
ch 1,
abuseI really liked your story. If you wanted to you could probably write more about the early days of the Death Eaters. If Voldemort wanted them to wear somthing stupid, or if he found out Bellatrix liked him. Snape trying to scare the wall didn't make any sense to me but it was still funny. Would you perhaps read my fic What's-his-name vs the World?
Tiffingirl
2005-09-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is great! I think you should have another chapter! I don't laugh easy, at all, but I laughed at this! Pwese keep going!
Lestatlover1784
2005-09-03
ch 1,
abuseOMFG, that was hilarious! XD An insight to the random lives of Death... Munchers. XD Heh. Great story. XD
AJers
2005-09-03
ch 1,
abusepfft, for the record, the things I do for u pple. :P I am now a registered user of since u do not accept reviews from pple who aren't. (notice my improper grammar, w00). Okay, anyways, I'll actually type normal now. Awesome comedy! It reminded me a lot of my sister stephanie who calls people butt-muncher for some odd reason that I have yet to decipher, however, it added to my amusement as I read this. :) I'll cya in chat! (oh, btw, I almost puked at the thought of Narcissa and Snape and Bella and Voldie. Even though I know they're fairly popular ships *sighs* it's just something that should not be brought out in the open. For my sake. :P )
skarm
2005-09-03
ch 1,
abuseYou're nuts, Chris. That is a compliment, though.
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