Quite nice! Quite nice indeed! I can't really find a highlight of the story, as the thing was a short drabble. But it had more power in that drabble than many lengthy fics I've read that are written without any skill. So, well done and keep up the good work!

Absolutly incredikupo! This is one of the best one shots I've EVER read, kupo! I could picture this in my mind the whole way through, kupo! You must do more! This is what good one shots are made of, kupo!

Kupo! :D

that was amazing. I liked it =) best one shot ive ever read!