Who is who in the story? I'm guessing that the last person listed on the Forewards is Shizuka, Hua Zhe Lei is Rui and Shan Cai is Tsukushi. I think.

there's nothing left to say except: awwwwwwww 3

Great story, but very sad at the end. :)

i don't know if i should be happy about the last chapter or sad about this one :(

*chokes Himiko to death*

.. and this problem is solved :D

wow! cliff hanger alert! gosh... can't wait for the next chapter.. this story is good

!

girl, this story is most likely going to kill ME Oo. your cliffhangers are MAD Oo

! *falls down crying* OOOOOOOOOOOOOO

you can't do this! :'(

poor Rui, poor Tsukushi (poor me who's going to be killed 'cause her scream woke up her parents Oo)

cuuuuuuuuuuuuuute 3 *-*

you should write more 1 shot stories. (:

You're gonna continue right? The story has not yet ended right?

Though I keep correcting your pinyin, I enjoyed your story(:

however, there's something I would like to ask,

what do you mean by

bu yao zhi qu ma

in the previous chappie (36)?

Couldn't figure that one out:P

P.S. Pardon my curiosity, but are you a chinese?

Sorry about it!

But if you're trying to say good night, it should be

wan an (晚安）

instead of just

wan（晚）

it's just a language expression difference(:

Ehh...

Sorry for the continuous pointing of mistakes, but...

For the previous chappie,

shen ma?

Should be

shen me? (what? 什么？)

and this chappie,

It's

Deng (wait 等)

not

dung

:D

the story seems to progress very nicely except for some language errors in both English and the Chinese pinyin(:

"Jin de ma? Wei she ma?"

it's supposed to be romanised as

zhen de ma?Wei shen me?(really?Why?真的吗?为什么?)

"Wo bu ji dao... wo bu ji dao..."

supposed to be

wo bu zhi dao... (I don't know... 我不知道。。。）

Nice story(:

but there's a slight mistake,

should be

"ni hai hao ma?" （你还好吗？）

instead of

"ni hao bu hao?" （你好不好？）

which sounds weird.（：