this is great pms

Great story, I love it. Please keep going on with the story, it's awesome.

dude! u should SO keep up the story!! dont see why you shouldnt include other characters from the L Word... cuz... frankly... mutant x... plus the L Word... is like... perfect!

Wow, great chap. Those two are soo cute together. Hope you update soon. I can't wait to see where you're taking this.

Great chapter! I just have a few questions. Are you making Lara amnesiac Emma or is she really Lara. And if so will you be including other characters from the l word becuase the restaurant Lara works at is in that sports club or whatever it's called where Dana plays tennis. Or does this have absolutely nothing to do with the show. I'm just a little confused. well anyway, on to chapter three!

LOL! Way to go. Although I wonder how it is that Shal came to be L.A. And now she runs into Lara?!? Great chapter can't wait to see what happens. hey! are you gonna make them long lost twins or something? I guess I'll find out. I have two chapters to go.

i hope u upsate soon! This is a gr8 fic lol like i said i hope u update soon.

Woho! I am really liking this story ^_^
I am just wondering about whats gonna happend next and what is going on? Is Lara really Emma, or is Emma gone for good? And how will Shal react?

Anyways, I love your writing (as always) and I`m waiting for more ^^

Emma is really dead right?
its not fair lara really likes shal but shal is looking for emma in lara, she (lara) is bound to get hurt
shal needs her time to think and realize what she really wants emma or lara

pleace send the next chapter! it is really great keep it up.

oh please
this fic does not suck
what gave you that idea?
it kicks **! :D

interesting the way shal's thinking
makes sense
wonder if she kisses like emma did...
if lara is lara that would be one freaky coincidence
anyway, great so far :D

You HAVE GOT TO update more often! This story is going very well, I am excited to see how the Emma/Lara situation is explained, my only critique would be to please have longer chapters ;)

wow you know how to keep a girl hanging on ;) great as always, you know i love your work and enjoy reading it.
i really need to know if lara is really emma the suspense is killing me, but i love cute shal ;)
update asap please :)

interesting story :)

you never fail to disappoint :) well worth the wait, thanks, i hope you update again soon :)