I love almost every story line I've read in this collection so far; including this "The training of the Shrew" one. However, the is one small error that has been nagging me. At the start of the story Hermione invites Luna as a friend to the dance and Ron assumes that its romantically motivated and condemns it. Hermione is rightfully angered, but rather than claiming its platonic as originally implied she just leaves it as unsaid thus implying that Ron is correct. Then throughout the story the relationship signs between Hermione/Luna switch almost randomly from budding romance to close friendship. In a way it makes sense because they're young and thus easily confused by emotions/hormones, but for me-the outside observer-it makes it feel like I'm watching a play in which all the actors decide to switch storylines simultaneously. A single paragraph inserted into the right place explaining the complexities within Hr/L's developing relationship would be very helpful.

This one really has potential. You are a wonderful writer.

wow! Took me a while to read all of them but I loved every one! Made me laugh, cry, think 'what the heck?' but it was excellent! Woo! ^_^

oh boy, this could turn out quite good.

oh please rorschach, even if just on TFF, please expand on this. i think it would be awsome to see this going further.

Just out of curiousity, where did you find the OMAKE at the end of chapter three?

i didn't care for the main idea here, but i love the omake for odd idea 104

MY RIBCAGE
-clutches stomach-
-dies laughing-

I <3 Luna. ;)

i gotta say that this chapter is one i wouldn't mind seeing as a full story. science harry is funny and smart and makes things interesting. it would get read a lot i am sure. also, you can actually learn stuff from it. shocking for fanfiction a little. i really do love the ideas you all come up with


Jone-Z

This's pure win!

I love this fic man!

You have wrote something good here now!

^_^

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probably the worst thing about this is that none of these stories get continued, or at least not by you, and usually not very well

I was getting the RPG sense from this.

Love the omakes, the first one would have gone well with the story where Harry and Hermione are thieves.

Good little bit there, and would be fun to see a follow up on that one day, just to see how far Harry would push things with his new position.

It sort of reminded me of the one where Harry is a hunter in Africa.

Seems like it has possibilities especially in the interaction between Harry and the order. Thanks for writing. W.