 Anonymous 2009-11-24 . chapter 93 I love almost every story line I've read in this collection so far; including this "The training of the Shrew" one. However, the is one small error that has been nagging me. At the start of the story Hermione invites Luna as a friend to the dance and Ron assumes that its romantically motivated and condemns it. Hermione is rightfully angered, but rather than claiming its platonic as originally implied she just leaves it as unsaid thus implying that Ron is correct. Then throughout the story the relationship signs between Hermione/Luna switch almost randomly from budding romance to close friendship. In a way it makes sense because they're young and thus easily confused by emotions/hormones, but for me-the outside observer-it makes it feel like I'm watching a play in which all the actors decide to switch storylines simultaneously. A single paragraph inserted into the right place explaining the complexities within Hr/L's developing relationship would be very helpful. |
 Sol 2009-11-21 . chapter 95 This one really has potential. You are a wonderful writer. |
 Heartstones 2009-11-20 . chapter 105wow! Took me a while to read all of them but I loved every one! Made me laugh, cry, think 'what the heck?' but it was excellent! Woo! ^_^ |
 Shakeval 2009-11-17 . chapter 105oh boy, this could turn out quite good.
oh please rorschach, even if just on TFF, please expand on this. i think it would be awsome to see this going further. |
 mannd1068 2009-11-17 . chapter 3Just out of curiousity, where did you find the OMAKE at the end of chapter three? |
 Gundum M 2009-11-15 . chapter 105i didn't care for the main idea here, but i love the omake for odd idea 104 |
 MouseyCat 2009-11-13 . chapter 5MY RIBCAGE
-clutches stomach-
-dies laughing- |
 leona-the-critic 2009-11-13 . chapter 63I <3 Luna. ;) |
 jonez227 2009-11-11 . chapter 39i gotta say that this chapter is one i wouldn't mind seeing as a full story. science harry is funny and smart and makes things interesting. it would get read a lot i am sure. also, you can actually learn stuff from it. shocking for fanfiction a little. i really do love the ideas you all come up with
Jone-Z |
 Sexy Neko Hibiki 2009-11-10 . chapter 22This's pure win!
I love this fic man!
You have wrote something good here now!
^_^
^_^ |
 pirate34 2009-11-10 . chapter 105 probably the worst thing about this is that none of these stories get continued, or at least not by you, and usually not very well |
 Anime Monster 2009-11-10 . chapter 105I was getting the RPG sense from this.
Love the omakes, the first one would have gone well with the story where Harry and Hermione are thieves. |
 Wonderbee31 2009-11-09 . chapter 105Good little bit there, and would be fun to see a follow up on that one day, just to see how far Harry would push things with his new position. |
 Fire From Above 2009-11-09 . chapter 105It sort of reminded me of the one where Harry is a hunter in Africa. |
 Wolfric 2009-11-08 . chapter 105Seems like it has possibilities especially in the interaction between Harry and the order. Thanks for writing. W. |