A blonde girl named Samantha Carter? Are you by any chance an SG-1 fan?? Haha perfect anyway! Reading on! ^_^

Samantha Carter, huh?
Isn't that the name of a character from Stargate SG1?

OH!

I didnt even realize that was the ending...it seemed a little rushed...Can you please make a sequel...that would be great

are you making a sequal to this? I think you should. It is a really great storey line.

great chapter, wonderful ending. sad to see that it was the last chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories

Nice story, although the ending seemes rushed.

good

I loved the ending! Just resolved enough to leave some open-ended-ness so that we can draw our own conclusions as to what happens next. It was great.

And I loved how you made the guys scared of Luke. He can be pretty menacing... ^_^

I'll be waiting for more from you!

Peace out back atcha!

-Krystal

WTF? That ending sucked.

Hiya Kase!
Well im sad that this was the last chapter, but it turned out so awesome! It was a lot of fun helping you with this fic and I hope to help you a lot more in the future! Your fics are absolutely amazing! But I tell you that all the time! =D

I can't wait to see what you have in-store for your next fic! Im sure whatever it is its going to be AB-FAB baby! hehe!

~Lindsay~

i loved it you need to write more i'm gonna miss this story:(

totally cannot see lorelai as a grandmother, and although that wouldn't actually mean she is old, it still makes her seem old. can't see her knitting either. that could be a disaster! yay, lorelai is talking to jess...definately better than luke's talk. lol. that is way much better than luke talking to jess! although luke talking to jess was pretty entertaining. i love dessert. hope you update soon, and i am pretty much sorry it took me forever to read the last three chapters. but think of it this way...three reviews at once!! lol!

woods and fire, man, what a great smell. :) oh dang, he wants to see more of her...he is very foward...and on their first...um...thing...cause i don't think we can really call it a date. OH CRAPPER...someone is home...and oh dang, that someone is luke. that has to suck. that is so funny...or something...when she was like i know what i am doing, then thought that she has no clue what she is doing! well...hmm...they neither one know what they are doing. lorelai should talk to jess. anywayz, nice chapter!!

aww...that is sweet of tim. well, or obsessive. lol. aww man, why can't she tell anyone. that pretty much sucks. alot! or something! gah. that is lame that he wants her to not tell anyone, like he doesn't want anyone to know. gah. i am glad i am getting caught up on this story, it is great!

Love both this and Jessie. Jessie wouldn’t be Will’s step cousin though, just his cousin. She would be Rory’s step cousin since Rory isn’t Luke’s kid but Will is so he would be a full cousin to Jess. You probably got it confused with step brother and sisters but Lorelai would be her full Aunt since the Luke’s her full Uncle and they got married. That’s the only thing I saw off and I really like it so far.

I already think Tim is a bad guy, he was pressuring her, maybe not to have sex, but it was getting there. And he keeps calling her Red despite the fact that she hates it. And Jess is being naïve, the only reason he wouldn’t want to tell anyone about her is him being embarrassed, I doubt he even thought about what she wanted. Maybe he’s not as big a jerk as he appears though, I don’t know. I don’t like him right now but that could change.

And Luke kicking him out was cool. I’m glad too, though I do wonder what would have happened if he didn’t come back. I think Tim would have tired to pressure her into sex. But maybe I’m wrong, you know him, and her, better than anyone else being the creator but he already seems like a bad guy to me.

Anyway I love this so far and I’m interested to see where you’re going. Will bonding with Luke is cool, just try not to take away from his and Lorelai’s relationship because of it. She is starting to bond more with Jess now so I guess it would balance out, and it would be easier for Jess to talk to Lorelai about that kind of thing than Luke. I mean, really, what does he know, his a guy. He never had to go through the things Jess is. And what was the thing about Lorelai telling Emily about Jess’s period? That seemed a little weird and I’m not really sure what happen. Though I have to agree with Jess, what was Lorelai even thinking? I’m not even sure what happen but I can tell it was probably embarrassing and not really anyone’s business besides Jess. Lorelai maybe, but just so she can help out, but that’s it.

I wouldn’t really know if Jess is missing out on anything, I’m not like most teenagers my age and am probably missing a lot but I’m fine. She seems normal enough to me, I hope she doesn’t have an eating disorder or get one though, that would be horrible. It would however be good plot and very believable. Of course her last line is what’s for dessert so she should be fine, I don’t know. Just keep up the superb writing.

~Adios~
~Epona~