I loved reading this - especially the interaction between Rizz and Foxflash which (admittedly) made up ninety-nine percent of the fic, so I suppose that as far as picking favorite parts goes, that's not saying a lot. Rizz's mindvoice was a treat to read though, as were Foxflash's replies and thoughts. A yummy read, with (what was to me) a twist in the tail.

Oh ... That is ebil(guess i've been playin too much dragon fable) Good laughing plot bunny stew.

Oh, really nice. Having Valdemar fans arrive in Hawkbrother territory to be either eaten or shot. Good sotry though. Good Job!

haha... lol... title... i give this 4 darwin awards out of five

*snicker* Loved this one, just loved it! Gonna have to sit down and read through your archive tonight, if the others are anything like the first two, I'm hooked! _

Hysterical! You sure do have it in for the fanatic Mary Sue's of the world...although it does sound like a very fitting way to take care of them!

*mf*

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! hehe...thats a very intersting and fresh view of crossovers. heh...no one ever thought that in crossovers, there may be some language and cultural difficulties...*snort*

I like it!

Woohoo! Down with the Mary-Sues!

Omigawdisahaukbruvver!Sihnmiihelokittybackpakpliz!Weluvu!

Fell out of my chair laughing!

Very good with the potentional to be rather funny. Are they being invaded by MarySue fangirls from earth looking for Companions?

((Humans... crunchy. Thanks for the meal- rather stringy, though. ))

Loved the idea! Brilliant job killing off the Mary Sues.

Bwahahahaha! Etctera-cat, I think I love you.

On a side note, if I was somehow dropped into Valdemar (ha, I wish) and saw a Hawkbrother, my response would probably be the same as the Mary-Sue. Only in the opposite direction.

:Don’t let Uncle Windsnow hear you, Rizz. He’ll have Ylaar chase you all over the Vale.: Windsnow was brother to Foxflash’s mother, and the leader of the Day Scouts. He was also a near-Master level mage and had been amongst the worst hit by the recent problems.

“What do I find here?” The question was rhetorical, and the smooth baritone announced the arrival of its owner; Day scout Leader Sunstone, as he stepped into the Meeting Circle. “Two half dead scouts, by the look of things.”

*absolutely dies of laughter* That is fantastic! So wonderfulyl fantastic!

Ohhmigawdissamarysue! *can't stop laughing*

And so the invasion of Mary-Sues into Valdemar begins...

Ahahahaha, that was utterly fantastic. XD You almost made me snort milk onto my keyboard.