woah! this was so great! and if you wrote the poem good job! I loved your ending!

Ooh...I like this. Very nice, very nice...dark...smooth, but twisted. I really, really like it. I believe I'll favorite it. Heheh, you don't need to be quite as apologetic as you are (or were, considering you wrote this six years ago...-_-'), it's a story about VOLDEMORT, of course it'll be a little...different. Good job!

Wow. That was pretty disturbing, but not bad. Voldemort is pretty screwed up. (In canon and fanfiction. More so in fanfiction) The whole Draco thing you threw in at the end was very twisted. All in all, I liked it.

Brilliant!

Hey it was a good fic. NO need to apolgize. It was original and that's what writting fanfiction is all about right? I mean if it's not then you are basically writting J. K. rowlings stuff all over again.

ZOMGWTFAMAZING.

*cough*

Very nice. I liked it. _

Well, I don't get it.

Did Voldemort entice Draco into wanting to think a certain way about Harry? Could you email and explain this?

(merely raises an eyebrow)

will you right a sequel? and whats with the 'I'm sorry?"

So good, like rich chocolate. Could you perhaps add chapters to this please? It's a great piece that needs to be continued.

voldemort is evil. *sinister laugh* and you captured his cruel deranged insanity perfectly. this fic is priceless. it's not really that dark, it just makes you think. you successfully delved into the manipulative scheming mind of lord voldemort, and that in itself is a great accomplishment. if you have time, please read Harry Potter and the Magic Jigsaw Puzzle, posted in this feltongurl account, written by me, ro-an, friend of feltongurl. it's my first attempt at slash, and i would really appreciate it if you could leave a review. and if you like the story, please tell your frinds about it. thanks!

wow! what are you sorry for? this was great! incredible POV, you're so good at this!

hmmm... powerful stuff. and a bit creepy, but the good kind. you pull of his character really well. towards the end i think i zoned out a bit becuase suddenly their was Draco... and so i read the ending over with. i like it, it would be a great start to a really dark story. but i kind of like it the way it is now, questions left unanswered.

Cheers!

Cherry Stain

See, I DID find this sick, disgusting and perverted, and guess what: I liked it!

No seriously, this is a praise not a flame. I really like the way you make Voldemort sound like. From your point he almost seems more cruel and evil than Joanne Rowling made him, and I especially like the way you made him be attracted to James/Harry in that weird, evil, twisted way.

I liked it, you write very well. It had a sort of poetry about it. Grim disturbing poetry, but poetry none the less. Interesting take on Voldemort though. Well, gots to be going, love to everyone!

Me! ChaffonGal!