oh my god, that was gorgeous. you write beautifully and i love how you deepened seiya's character. love this story. :)

aw...this is soo...sad...(sniff sniff)...i'm heart broken...tears are gushing from my eyes...i'm whimpering...my eyeliner is running down my face in streaks of black (well...ok...maybe not the last one since i don't wear make-up)...but still, this story is really good.

Just reading Seiya's POV made me melt into this puddle of bittersweet melancholy. I really like how you make it so that Usagi actually does realize her love for Seiya . O and all that "not knowing what the meaning of the ring is" and that "destiny tells me to do so...and who am I to defy destiny" really delivers a big impact.

sigh. I really really wished that they could be together in the end. I mean, seiya and usagi are the best anime couples i've ever encountered! but i guess their relationship wouldn't have been that dramatic to us anime-watchers if the ending weren't so sad (it lurches at my heart...and i actually cried when Seiya had to leave - u know, that last scene on teh rooftop when he told Mamoru to take care of Usagi...I TOTALLY melted into tears!...and then my mom wuz like looking at me from the kitchen thinking that i got dumped or something).

BUT! that's what all these fanfictions are for! i totally heart and all these stories that allow Usagi and Seiya to finally be with one another! yepyep!

ok...haha...great story!! =DD

What a beautiful story! Seiya's POV was heartbreaking, really. Very well written! And I liked that you didn't write Mamoru as a bad person (even if I like Seiya more than him, I have to admit he's not a bad person at all). I could feel the sorrow and desperation (is that the word? Sorry, my English isn't good) of the Starlights. Awesome! Thanks for sharing your talent! Someday I want to write like you!

Very nice...and touching...and sweet =3

very well written..i enjoyed it a lot!

I love it... it was just so sad.

WOW.
This is all I can say.
You are really good writer and good psychologist either. I have never read such a mind-penetrating story about Usagi and Seiya before. Gorgeous, really.
Thank you.

*wipes tear*

That was beautiful. It's a perfect blend of prose and poetry... So touching...

And why did Usagi have to leave Seiya? But I guess that's what makes it bittersweet and all together addicting. *sighs*

PS.If you're still looking for a beta-reader, I can do that for you :)

Your story is very good. Keep up the great work

WOW! this is so powerfully amazing! I absolutly Love it! is there going to be a sequel? what a 'beta-reader'? I LOVE it! its so amazing, and yet so... sad.

~Imortal Sailor Cosmos

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That was so beautifully written. I really loved it. This goes into my favorites! There is just something about Usagi and Seiya that I love so much ^-^ Good work!

I loved it, it was a great story and I even like that song from F.A so I think it made it all the more enjoyable to read. You have a lovely way of writing and creating life to your story. Don't ever give that up. ^^

Oh! I loved this story! There is just something special about a Usagi and Seiya story that just gets you right there...beautifully written!

wow...

that was... COOL