Wow - absolutely brilliant! Now, on to the sequel! :D

okey,this story was awesome! Quite different from the other stories but still SO good!(it makes this one even better,am I right? ;]) In every way great fanfic! Very nice work! Can't wait to get to read the seguel!

-Tsukikaze-

Chpter 8 - Hephaistion is packing for the trip and refuses Alexander's help saying he will be unable to find anything in Pella if Alexander helps.

Later Hephaistion expresses surprise at Alexander's reference to Hephaistion's going on the trip : “Am I going with you?”

In chapter 7 the question had already been addressed when Alexander asks Hephaistion if he will come with him and Hephaistion states "I am yours" ... he later leaves to go pack his own belongings


There is a sequencing or logic problem. Obviously Hephaistion already knows he is going so why the question?

That was AMAZING! You are such a wonderful writier and I just LOVED this! It's the only slash I've ever read so I think I have a nice a=idea now. *adds Alexander/Hephaestion to list of favorite pairings*

o wow i really love this story, very well writen and one of the longest Alexander stories i have found very good job on this fic, now i shall read the sequal its hott! lol

An interesting alternative Alexander history weldone

Well good thumbs up

I have reread this story after reading your sequel. I think the same thing of this story as I did the other. Wonderful. Delightful. Thank you so much for sharing your story with the world. It is maqnifique!

C'est bien,

~Baliansword

i love the whole story and i am wating to read your next chapter.

Awesome chapter!! Excellent job!!

A wonderful end to an exciting and dramatic journey for Hephaistion and Alexander.
Now their true destiny begins...
Well done!!

Awe, what a great ending for such a great story!

I can hardly wait for the sequel!

You earned everyone of those reviews and I bet ya you will get even more as time passes!

Good luck with you latest story!

Nelia

... amazing my dear. Once again you astonish me. The blessed darkness. I love the portrayal of death. So bittersweet and quick. How beautiful. It has inpsired me to write a poem. I love you and your inspirational writings. Thank you.

I love how you made Hephaistion strong when Alexander was not. How real it seems.

MANY COMPLIMENTS,
Lexy

Nice update. Looking forward to see what happens next...if Heph will take his place alongside Alexander as his most trusted companion.

You're quite welcome!

Bravo! Just Bravo that was one of your best chapters yet. Nice hint of the movie, great discription of the arena and the emotions of Alexander. Hephaistion's and the Queen's presence!

I loved it from the first word to the last!

Well done, I commend you!

Update soon!

Nelia

Ps: Concrats on the more then 100 reviews already!