i like the way you write about doumeki >.<

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*spins around happily* Love this!

I like your description of what love and hate's textures are.

heart-wrenching, but achingly beautiful. Nice job!

wow. fits everything... the story, the chara, their relationship... everything.

wow.

very interesing, i appreciated it quite a lot.

Oh this is so sad! ;-; And its a wonderful counterpoint to the actual scene when it happens, so in character and the writing is very nice as well. ^_^ A wonderful piece of writing.

That was very well explained. Good work!

Epp! Very nice!

I am visualising your "prickly hatred" as holly leaves and "love" as ruby stones.