D This is such a good story! It's been 10 years but... did you write any more at all? I love your characterisation and just overall style... please, please post a tiny bit more!

Hey, this is really good! You should continue it! _ I'd love to read more.

Hey! Nice job here! You've got the dialogue just right, with the rambling eloquence. It's awesome! Can't wait to read more!

Great beginning. I hope that this is the beginning, because I would really like it to continue. You wrote it well, and the depth that you gave the characters was much like those of the movie. Highly enjoyable. Please continue!

ooh? moreishness?

great fic, loved the insights into Bartleby. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!

*Whistles* Frickin' amazing. I just caught the movie a few days ago for the first time and your fic absolutely does it justice. Seriously contemplating suicide if you don't continue this story (kidding). Great, great, story, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue it!

Although I, personally, don't like to think of Bartleby and Loki that way (mostly b/c I'm hot for both of them myself)-I really enjoyed this story. Loki beautifully explains Bartleby's pain. It was very touching. Where's the rest?

Very good! Consistent with the movie, too.

Terrific job! You wrote the characters so well, and your grammar was impeccable (not a must, but it definitely makes fics more enjoyable). This just demands a sequel...I liked it so much.

You need to write another chapter! I love Bartleby/Loki

more more more!

So, how many begging people is it going to take before you continue this? *g* Great 'fic, nice hinting at what Loki feels, and such.

Oooooh! I *Love* it! Its fantastic and wonderful and worthy of good gushing. More, please, I beg of you!

oh, I just love this fic! completely brilliant work... and just where's the next chapter, hmmm?