Great story. You have a wonderful way of writing that really paints the picture, keeps the reader engaged and wanting more. I would love to see a follow up or continuation to this story as the ending seemed to leave room for one. I hope you write more!

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GREAT fanfic!

I loved it.

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Great story! Too bad you didn't let Dee Dee admit to being in love with Hunter.

Viorna:

Very nice job! The plot is interesting and well thought out, and your grammar, spelling and punctuation usage is wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your stories.