Its been so long. This really should be continued.

That was verry good. I hope you start puting more action into it, but so far its like the openning to any Sin City story.
Please write more of this, I want to find out what happens!

Holy Crap! The way you wrote it was almost exactly like the movie or the books. I could practically hear Clive Owen speaking it. Also, to base it off of Miho, who is my favorite character, is kick@$$. Update soon.

Can't wait for more, please update a soon as you are able to

This is really good, it reads just like one of the comic books, well done, plese continue!