I just found this story and I love it!

When do you think you will have the sequel up? I'm anixous to find out what is going to happen.

Congratulations, you wonderful little author!

Your story has been selected for addition into the C2 archive “Polished and Shining”.

Listing in this archive not only determines your knack of storytelling and innate talent for the written craft, but may give you the recognition you deserve. Your hard work and determination has paid off, and your story is not only compelling, but shines as one of those rare gems that readers often search for in vain.

I humbly wish you the best of luck in all your future written endeavors.

We, the readers, thank you for this unexpected pleasure!

It took me all night to read this. XD (Mainly because I was scared out of my wits previously from playing a bit of Fatal Frame I.)

Your writing style is the best I've seen yet, kudos. :D

I was horrified from this story. XP I didn't even sleep last night because I kept seeing things moving out of the corner of my eye.

*adds to favourite stories* :D

I wanna see the sequel! :3

Wow! Amazing story! Although it is quite confusing, it is a very exciting story. I like it so much, really! Can't wait to read your prequel!

Omigod. You are my hero. That was fantastic.

I have NO idea what was happening. But i loved it. That shouldn't be possible, but somehow it is.

Now I feel like writing again lol - and I haven't written anything for about a year!

Absolutely brilliant.

I am in love XD

It wouldn't be confusing if this whole fic is turned into a movie. It might be very exciting too. Still, you're story is great the way it is(although a little confusing at the last part). Congrats to you for finishing this. Looking forward for the sequel.

tis over...i can't say i'm not confused. i'd be a liar if i said i wasn't. but that's probably because i read things so fast lol. i shall try to read it over again so i get it. *nods determindly* there's going to be a sequel/prequel? yay! ^^ anyway, twas a great fic and i am glad i took the time to read it!(i barely ever read other peoples fics now...i feel badly for doing so though...ha ha) *raises glass* Kanpaii!(cheers) congrats on finishing this fic!

I never would've expected her situation to be like that. Wow, that was a shocker...so, that's it for now? HmZ...well, there will be a sequel/prequel? That's good because I'm still kind of confused. Haha...anyways, I don't really understand...maybe if I went back and reread the whole story, I'll get what you're trying to get across...haha...that way, I'll pay attention the whole way through. Yep, that's what I'll do. Anyways, it was good and I enjoyed it! I hope you have the time to post up the sequel/prequel soon! ^_^

This is all I have to say that sums up what I think about this fic...

Fan**inTastic

well...depending on how it ends, you could have someone else come into the story and is looking for the main character! ^_^; It could be third-person point of view from there...just an idea. I'm going to wait for the end before I give any more thought on your sequel. ^^ It's going great and some things are clearing up! Update soon!

I suggest that the sequel should be in first person POV to let the readers feel the feelings of the characters. As for the character's connection with the people in the game or this story is optional. I believe that your sequel would surely be a fine and interesting one. So, I would be reading on this story and your coming sequel. Keep up your talents and confidence.

Great, more twists and lots of fun! ^_^ Twists and confusion is a great big combination, you know! ^_^ I find that any movie/book/whatever that has twists is usually confusing. *nods* Anyways, this chapter was great! ^_^ The anxiety of finding out who the main character is...is getting to me! Anyways, update soon!

yes! update! ^^ lol. good chapter! my eyes hurt now...i kept forgetting to blink. -_- anyway, sequel! yay!! :P can't wait for the next update! but oh no! even more confusing? ah! lol

Oh, crap...
Sorry I haven't reviewed for the last 4 chapters. I read the chapters, but my computer was being a ** and wouldn't load anything. Computers do make life easier alright, heh...
Anyways, I LOVE this chapter! This chapter answered ALL of my questions! (Well, not all of it but almost all of it...) And was Miaka's confession suppose to sound like a yuri? Cause it kinda did to me. (Sorry if it wasn't suppose to!)
Keep it up and update ASAP!

The story is still as good as ever. Now it starts to fill up some of the blank spots of the story, like the ritual. Good. Now, I just can't wait to read the following chapters.