This was both adorable and hilarious at the same time. Even if Arty was kind of naive when he was little, like all kids are, he was still way too cute for his own good.
Well, I can say that I made a lot of 'aww'-sounds and laughing when I read this. I would absolutely like to read more.
I just can't get enough of toddler-Arty :)

The next morning…

“Juliet! You can’t do that, you could get cataracts!”

That's really hilarious=) Poor Arti... His daddy was being mean, sticking him under his arm like that...

All in all, good story. I liked it=)

That was adorable! I can't help thinking about what little 3-year-old Arti looks like=D

Nice chapter=D

Hey. Tora here. Good story, it's both very funny and cute. Keep it up!

GAH! Sweet, innocent, naive little Arty? NEVER! Hahaha, great job on this fic, now I know not to roll my eyes again.

LoL. that was very cute!! very cute! Thanks so much. Appreciate it.
~welovechocolate~

AH!! ("sputtering") "...mean old mr...thinks he's too GOOD...to hug his own...SON!! AG! lol. well, it was very well writen, and you got your point across without straining too much. Thanks so much! ttyl.
~welovechocolate~
(poor Arty)

*Really should have judgedated this fic, but kind of didn't bother with humour!fic.* Incidentally, I am extremely annoyed that this was nommed for humour. It's *so* much more sophisticated than that.

I'm not a very consistent reviewer. About 5 a month. But I read this on crim today (yes, I know, it's been on there for ages), and I just had to fly over here and review.

This was super, super, super!

As I say, too good to be humour - despite some lovely wit. It just kept kicking me in the guts.

If I have one criticism, it's that maybe some of the interactions seemed a little... stereotypical. Particularly in "Eye Rolling," which I thought was not *quite* as good.

Hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter. I expecially liked the wilting part 'nothing in a Fowl ever wilts'!

HAhahaha! I suppose it was Artemis II who said the last line. Really good!

aw- Timmy's mean :(
scarred for life- *sudden thought* maybe this is where arty's hatred of 'teenagery' things comes from? ;) who knows. funfun

Cataracts. Of course. What else could it be?

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. And the last line was the most priceless of them all. It just captured the whole childlike whimsy and magic of the piece so perfectly. Little Artemis was spectacularly in character throughout the whole thing, as was everybody else.

Bravo.

I like this one better! It's MUCH funnier!!

I like it. A little sad, but so is life.