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| Anti-Logic 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseYet again, beautiful - except in a much darker way. I like the unsettling imagery of her eating his heart, and the title's irony is just really good. "She watched him sleep and bending over him placed her fingers one by one against his neck, like wings to frame the breath in his throat." I loved this line. |
| James Birdsong 2006-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abusePerfect |
| HeeroTomoe 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI can hear their voices so clearly. It hurts; lovely. |
| Lady Kiren 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseIt was beautiful in a dark kind of a way. But I liked it. Who was the pairing? |
| Nelja 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it very much ! So beautiful, so poetic, so dark. With each word, each sentence, at the right place. |
| Azamiko 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...fascinating... |
| Urei Sachi 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseI don't think I'd forget this one for a long time... AAH! I'm starting to get obsessed with your works... |
| Katrina-chan 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseAnother one of your stories, I see. This was a bit creepy but still ver good. I really liked this one. Keep up the good work! ~Kat-chan |