 Megan Consoer 2006-10-24 . chapter 6I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
 Izzy 2005-11-30 . chapter 3 Interesting. I think that I shall read this story to see where it goes. I like it so far, and I agree it is better to wait to bring the enemy in. |
 Flame Creeper 2005-11-12 . chapter 1 bad summary, bad title. how do you expect to draw readers in with your story? |
 Megan Consoer 2005-11-12 . chapter 2I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
 Megan Consoer 2005-11-11 . chapter 1I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |