well...thats gay

i like it but,neds improvemint

liked the frist story of this but it went by to quickly.the aprt where Edward left.now that was unexpected.nice job on the frist story.
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very great job on the story so for keep it up and update soon.

Wow grounded for 3 years...I'm so shocked... -kicks in shin- RIP OF ARTIST! -rewind- Just kidding haha! Oh well... I guess I'll find a new vamp. story to read.

two years? please updtae!

This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Ed and Winry forever.

dang, sucks to be you... they know not to ground me off my computer cuz they kno i dont gove a **. update soon

no! ;-;

::big gasp:: I can't believe this... ::another gasp:: this is horrible...absolutely horrible. I was grounded the tv because of my grades. Get those grades up...or else...just kidding. Really though, we reviewers are waiting patiently...but soon we'll go nuts! So, good luck!

That was incredible. I finnaly finished reading the whole story. It was very good. A few grammar and spelling mistakes but it didn't take away from the story. I do have a suggestion...More feeding.
Mayby your vampires aren't like that but I would enjoy reading about a feeding of some sort. Just a friendly suggestion.
Thank you for the great story.
Kurochi

THIS IS A GREAT STORY! I JUST FINISHED READING EVERLASTING LOVE SO I DECIDED TO READ THIS ONE! THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

WAH! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

nice i like this ff but... why 5 years thats way-way to long. but nice ff! you better start working on your shcool work!

He better not leave her ever! They make a great couple don't you think? Well...of course you do. Your profile does say "EDXWINRY FOREVER!" Great sequel so far. Update soon, you're awesome. (BTW, I updated my story).

Loved it. Can't wait until the next chapter. Woo Hoo!