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Locket123
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
Dude! it been four years you got to update please oh please!

love your stories (i was to lazy to review on the first story to this sequel ok so sorry)

i like how you made BB and Rae and the others.

when you said that Arella and Slade had a surprise for Raven i figure either baby or they're getting married.
wrecked
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
i would really like to see what you've got planned for this story. it's been over three years since this was updated, but i'm definitely interested, haha.

this is great...as i'm sure you know.
Mythar
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
Another chapeter he says
lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
please continue!
shadowedmysteri
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
Cool! This story is awesome! I've never heard of a Slade/Arella pairing before. And also, wasn't Red X supposed to be Robin in disguise?
Ikasury
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
ne, you ever gonna continue this?? come on!! its started out so good, so what if its like, 3yrs later, get back to it!! i mean you got Ravy's mom with a new baby in the tower!! and he's SLADE'S BABY!! this just screams AWESOME plot-device-age ^.^ and honestly, the kid is gonna grow up to be awesome, since both his parents are TOTALLY AWESOME!! plus he'd be all neutral and angsty with macho-kickassness and some magic, maybe, plus that attitude dysfunction that makes his parents awesome, plus a 'partially evil' older half-demon sister!! XD and its kinda obvious Blackfire and Red X are gonna be hitting it, if only out of sexual frustration XD and seriously, Cy's gone evil from new software, AND ATTACKED RAVEN!! you seriously can't leave it there buddy, so get to, let the mania continue!!

till next (there better be a NEXT) *salute-waves* Sayounara, Golden!!
-Ikasury
writingtitan
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
I loved it please update asap!
Deacon
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Your Arella is a real selfish ** isn't she. She doesn't contact her daughter for a year and just up and goes waltzing in her life again. I didn't think you could have made the mother more of an idiot with her already ** up past but now you just proved me wrong. And acting all high and mighty in front of Raven like that. Arella doesn't deserve that right...stupid **.

And for the mother of the year goes to...

Overall with the exception of this and the baby which I have feeling will play a role in the story which I have feeling there is going to be Gary sue traits in the making, the baby already looks daunting.

It seems like a decent story. But seriously you should have left it alone meaning Ten Years Later. This story is going to ** up that jewel you created of a story.

~Deacon
Gun toten Girly
2008-01-26 . chapter 1
Have a good day?

Have a good day?!

How in the world am I going to have a "good" day, when an obviously well Action Packed/ Romantic/ Humorous story is just sitting there not being updated?!

I'm sorry, but you leave me no choice...

I'm going to have to put this story (And Ten Years Later)on my favorites list.

*sighs* I'm sorry that it had to come out like that. I hope you can forgive me.

-Gun toten Girly
Canis Black
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Wasn't sure if I'd reviewed this one or not. Well, I know it's a bit late, but this was a really good kick off, and I'm hoping that, even if it takes a while yet, that I'll have a chance to see more of this. If, on the off chance you've no plans to finish this story anymore, could I trouble you to at least reveal what your plans for it were (and maybe, possibly, anything you might have written but not posted)?
CraneLee
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
dun dun dun
Luff
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
It looks like you posted this a wee while ago (close to two years) but you have to update anyways!
I came accross Ten Years Later and I am now officially hooked.
I liked the start of Chapter 1, it introduced the story well. I thought it was quite nifty (ohyea I've always wanted to use that word).
So please update, it'll make my day.
I've got exams coming up so my days are going to need some major brightening.
Toodles
-Luff
Beautiful x lie
2007-08-21 . chapter 1
O this story's looking good so far,
keep writing.
Christina =)
2007-04-13 . chapter 1
Awsome story, loved it! Keep up the GREAT WORK!!
samuraigurl1213
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
Well this is well-written and definetly suspensful. I hope you might pick up writing on this once more, because this story has definte plot and I am on the edge of my seat.

-Em
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