it's so funny. update soon.

Hey Amy! Great, funny story you have here so far! Hehehehe, suck in for Seifer! BUT one thing, how come the chapters are repeated? Hmmm maybe you can remove the same chapters, well anyway the story was still really good! Keep going cos I like it!

Hey, i'm finally got around to using the internet. That's really good, and i gotta admit, Zell devouring the tomato sauce really got me by surprise. MAKE SOME MORE! And please bring Ellone into this =p

Ultimecia in a hotdog eating contest with Zell? hahahah! :D

hehehe. i lik the hot dogs!i had some prety recently... ^_^ just irresistible! now, i know how zell feels! *dramatic music*

Cool Amy, that was really funny! Squall is so OOC and I feel sorry for poor Zell eating all those chilli hot dogs. Boy just wait until he goes to the toilet. *shudder* Well keep up the work!

Pretty good! I like the way you captured zell's personality. Buy did u have to make in first person prespective. Finish it quickly please And dont forget to bring more cases to the super slueth ;) .

...! (people stare as they see me rolling on the floor) ummm... ok... that was funny! can't wait for the restaurant! hot dogs! yum...

doobly doo, that was really really funny. seifer and quistis. grrrrrrrr...and zell, so predictable. quistis...WHAT BUTT? lemme see...rinoa stole squall's ring and then someone stole rinoa's ring and rinoa wants squall to find it...um...original...keep going!

Can't imagine Squall being a detective though i can totally see Seifer as a detective hope you continue this oh and put Irvine and Selphie in it too please!