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| Bel Vezer 2005-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseThat was absolutely beautiful! I hope it's not a one-shot because I love it! Excellent characterization. You realy captured Piper and her emotions. "She’d be lost inside the labyrinth of her life, trying to figure out which way to turn when she hadn’t the faintest idea what to do." That was an incredible line. This is an amazing beginning! Keep it up. |
| Moony'sMate 2005-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good, but sad... I do hope it gets better in future chapters... |
| xheart to thee 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good.:D |