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Lady Hades
2007-02-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's me, Rach, I thought I should read some of your stuff in return for your help with the, err 'writing'. I really like this, you are a bit gory, Id never really realised. I think you portrayed Hector really well, amazingly so, and this just seems so typical of him.
You have like 310 reviews for HBB! That's unbelievable, e I remember when that story had just started, years ago now... it must be.
Anyway, this was excellent. Love it.
~Rachael
Ahyun13
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abuseHey! Remember me? I used to be called timezawastin... I quit writing for a while but I came back. And I remembered you and all your awesome stories so I wanted to read one again. And WOW! I got a great story.
Calliope Foster
2005-09-26
ch 1,
abuseOh an absolutely brilliant story from an absolutely brilliant author! You continue to astound me--this is a great story!
Bonafacio's grrl
2005-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseawwa...that was so sweet! I love Andro/Hec pairing and this story was extremely descriptive and full of prose. A bit long at times, but beautifully crafted.
LadyOfThieves
2005-09-15
ch 1,
abuseAs ever I'm loving it! You've really got me hooked to Hector-Andromache fanfics, off to read some more ones!
Lariren-Shadow
2005-09-09
ch 1,
abuseOk, so I didn't get the refernence, but I liked it. I mean, the whole battle scenes were wonderful and vivid. They seemed really real. Yay for the story.

~Jenny
lateBloomer04
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abuseWow...that was very powerful. I've never read a Troy fic like this one before. Your haunting descriptions of battlefields and killings made it very real. Nice job...I hope you write more soon. Hector always did seem like a reluctant hero to me.
Gaslight
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abuseThe interaction between Hector and Andromache after the battle was excellent - there's no possible way she could comprehend how or what he felt and the short temper was a great device to force him to open up about his early experience with war. And to make "hero" almost an insult and curse opens up the way for lots of drama and characterization, which you did perfectly.

Always love to read your stories! Don't ever stop. :)
lilycup
2005-09-07
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was really powerful. I truly felt for Hector and all that he went through, especially being shown a battle at such a young age - it seemed horrible.

I really enjoyed this. It was good to see it from Hector's point of view and it was refreshing to see that he doesn't love war, and how he went into a world of war.

Well done, it was great! :)
Preppygirl
2005-09-07
ch 1,
abuselovely story, my dearest. I already gave you my views on it, so all's well.

What'ja get for the babies? anything terrific? LLet me know... and wish both Tabitha and Orli (and they're momma) best opf luck and love from new mexico! (but do it in spanish: !bueno suerte y amor por nuevo mexico!) ...I don't think that's right. Is it? No.
Idun03
2005-09-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was very interesting and well written. It was refreshing that you choose to tell your story from Hector's point of view. I liked his realistic way of looking at his destiny and his duties.

The scene from his childhood with his mother also gave a deeper insight to his feelings and his fear of failing and not living up to what he is supposed to be - a hero. I also liked the interaction between Hector and Andromache.
mellowyellow233
2005-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow! That story was excellent. I love the troublesome moody Hector. I wish there would've been more lovin' (haha) but I still loved the story.
Cassie
2005-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseLast few lines left me with a "That was a blipping awesome fic". Very well written...and haven't read HBB yet, at least, I'm still on chapter eight...yeah, somewhere around there.
Wonderful job on this, though.

Cassie
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