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| JaneDoh 2007-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseFlawless as always. I love how the story can be so elusive yet full of emotion. The lack of details definitely makes this a more powerful story. |
| Smackalicious 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG, wow, that was incredibly awesome. I love pieces that are completely made of narrative. I mean, I love dialogue-laden pieces, too, but narrative is just nice, to get something from a 3rd person. Gorgeous. Love it. Keep writing! |
| AL 2005-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw! Sorry it took so long to reading and reviewing this. I didn't have time when I first got it and then amongst the crazyness of life I forgot about it. But here you go. That was just awesome. Well though and written. Cute, angsty and simple. Perfect. AL |
| Traci 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI wouldn't be a good friend if I didn't review :). Like I told you before, I love this. You managed to cover their entire relationship (strangers, friends, and otherwise) very, very well. Love the last paragraph!! :) Sigh, I so miss these guys. I still think Atlantis should find a way to bring them back. Sniff. Anyway, to quote Oliver Twist, "Might I have some more, please?" |
| Kathmak 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseOoh, very angsty. I'm glad you gave us a glimmer of hope at the end. I think it would be lovely if you would maybe do a companion piece someday from John's POV. I would love to know what was going on in his mind during this time. Overall, a pretty darn good read! |
| antishock123 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked this; I liked how you didn't portray Monica as pining away over a man who couldn't or wouldn't love her back. Perhaps that's why you haven't got many reviews - the sugarpop brigade only seems to review stories where they are OMG, so totally in love as soon as they lay eyes on each other. But anyway - it was well written piece. Well done. |
| Mariel3 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. I like how you've shown Reyes' relationship with John past and present. The difference between loving and being in love is a distiction that works well. And the last paragraph, of course is perfect. Thanks for a good read. |