That's wonderful. It's not overly drawn out, it's sweet, touching and well thought out.

This was the most believable Squallphie fic that I've read. Love it!

Just reread this story again. Loved it!

That is so adoroble, and cute please carry it on, I cant wait it was very romantic and did i mention sweet, it was written really well and it was squalphie aswell not many of them around. love it love LOVE IT!

Oh wow, I liked it alot. I'm a huge fan of SelphieXSquall pairings, I wish there were more of them around...

That's so CUTE! cutecutecutecutecute! ...really Chickie. Thanks for writing this ficcy. And keep up the great work.

They're so CUTE! damnit.

That is so sweet. cutecutecute.

Aw, they're so cute.

Heh. Nice start, Chickie.

aw that was such a beautiful lil fic, so cute, and i love that song. its so great, that one and sunset soon forgotten, is really good.

*squels* that was a really really cute story...*sigh* to bad it ended. fantastic writting. continue on with the good work

It's over. Well it was short but I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work in the future

The way you write is just amazing. Simple yet captivating. :)

What a wonderful ending! I love this story... as someone else wrote, this is light and sweet, just perfect for the character of Selphie. Your stories all seem to capture that essence of the main characters in the tone of the writing, and I marvel at that.