I loved this story! I could close my eyes and picture Zendall- you truly caught the true Zen!!

HOT! HOT! HOTQ - WOW now I need to cool off. Please don't let the story end here. Please post a new chapter soon.

Nice job. I love the water imagery. Water washes away the past so they can be "cleansed" of past "sins" and be free to love each other. You're very talented.

Oh, it was hot, too.

Your story is really good so far you should keep righting

I loved it please writing.
please.
please.

Simply wonderful, well written, correct grammer and spelling and best of all something that I could actually see happening on all my children! Good Job hope to see more!

Oh please write more! This is a wonderful story!

OMG. I love this chapter. The way you did the sex scebe between Kendall and Zack was dead on of how I think it would be if they actually did it on All My Children. Anyways I love the story so far and I think that Kendall and Zack are so hot together. Please post again soon. I want to know what they do next, how they deal with sleeping together and if they decide to have a real marriage.

have i mentioned lately that you're brilliant at this whole writing thing? i like this!

Absolutely brilliant!