 ilah;ga 2009-07-20 . chapter 10 oh. hermione's back ow. good. i was gettng sorta...nervous with the slutty(no other way to describe it..sorree)hermione...lol.. |
 kf. 2009-07-20 . chapter 9 wow. very...sexual. |
 abjka 2009-07-20 . chapter 8 whoaa. hermione's very...er...um...uh...for lack of a better word, different, isn't she...it's a little scary...so this is hermione's deepest desire? that's a little scary.. |
 aabjilfa 2009-07-20 . chapter 2 OH MY GOSH!! Hermione is...loosening up...because of that potion, right?! OH MY GOSH!! |
 purpleann 2009-05-12 . chapter 11 Just delightful! I have just recently found this (don't remember what led me here...sorry), but honestly this is now one of my all-time favorite Ron/Hermione stories! I love your use of Plot Device Magic, and I totally agree that Hermione would secretly want to do all the things she did in this story (except maybe the lapdance thing. ;)) Well done! Off to read all your other stories now. :) |
 CocoaCollidoscope 2008-12-06 . chapter 11Aw, no my bf said something exactly like that to me, too... and he'd never seen (OR heard of) Bridget Jones. I had a LOT of fun reading that... Nutzo Hermione was a hoot! And of course Ron would fret about losing his bookworm Mione. He'd be happy but confused and agitated. Now he has the best of her. Yay! That was a very cute story. |
 princessinct 2008-11-06 . chapter 11I really liked your Ron & Hermione story. I loved the "sassy vixen" Hermione and the more grown up Ron.
Loved it.
Thanks for an entertaining read.
On a side note, there were a couple of spelling mistakes that were a bit bothersome. I don't know if you'd like me to point them out or not, but I'll just mention a couple off the top of my head:
A-wall is actually AWOL (AWOL is an acronym for "Absent WithOut Leave" or "Absent Without Official Leave")
You also used the word "seen" as in, "seen as we're leaving" (I don't think that's the exact phrase you used, but it's the basic gist), which actually should be written as "seeing as we're leaving".
Hope this helps.
I really enjoyed your story and I hope my pointers only help (not offend, etc).
Thanks for the story. |
 Livia F. 2008-03-31 . chapter 11Ohh, I loved this fic. You've stayed true to the characters, and it was all so funny and cute. Poor Hermione, for the first time in her life she had the courage to do what she wanted... And all because of Pansy Parkinson! :D
This whole story was amazing... Congratulations! |
 Livia F. 2008-03-31 . chapter 1You know, this is one of the few fics I've ever read that I thought the characthers weren't a bit OC. Honestly, it was just like if JKR was writing it! I can't wait to read the rest of it and discover what Pansy's done... |
 tatewaki2000 2008-03-07 . chapter 11Fantastic fic. ^_^ |
 CEO-FLEX 2007-12-11 . chapter 11I've just finished and it was excellent. A well maintained pace thorughout the whole story and nothing too far-fetched. Don't worry im sure bridget jones would be honoured again i must say loved the scrying bit i'm a charmed fanatic. =] |
 CEO-FLEX 2007-12-11 . chapter 7Cool i noticed the whole scrying thing from charmed, that was cool. |
 CEO-FLEX 2007-12-11 . chapter 5Definately my favourite chapter so far. I love the plot and the pacing is fantastic. Well back to reading. |
 TheaLuthor 2007-08-11 . chapter 1I love this story. I read it over all the time. My favorite part is the dry comedy. Excellent job! |
 your personal sunshine 2007-08-03 . chapter 5so.
this is def. my favorite chapter so far.
and i seriously like the pace of the story.
any other story remotely along these lines, ron and hermione would have already jumped each other.
so, thank you.
:] on to the next chapter then. |