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Reviews For: Smoke Signals

Maidengirl 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI was definetly not expecting that at the end but it was a good fics though.
Lems 2006-03-12 ch 1,	abuseshort but well... i was expecting a multichapter TwT... INO:NEJI fics are just so rare -_-'
Trenchcoatgirl-Kyo 2006-02-28 ch 1,	abuseA little short, but I like it. Good job. And tsk tsk, Ino. Smoking stains your teeth.
mewling 2005-10-14 ch 1,	abuseAmazing. All of it. "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick." Succint.
kosumi 2005-10-02 ch 1,	abuseOH NO! I wonder if she knows... i wonder if Neji will save her. Aw... hahaha. But i liked this. Its funny though. Why would Neji be hanging around her shop in the first place though? You should write more into that. Because i would so read it! :)
Phox VS Frawg 2005-09-07 ch 1,	abuseO.o ino...smoking... srry cant picture it. or the pairing... but on the bright-side i think you pretty much kept them in character. "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick." ^^ i like that line. T.T poor ino's gonna die...
Yachtzee 2005-09-06 ch 1,	abuse...InoNeji? Interesting choice of pairing. Although Neji is not the type to couple with the loud, rambunctious Ino, this fiction was pretty slight. I have to say that your writing style is pleasant though. Good job, but I have to say that the pairing is not ideal.
Klayter McCabe 2005-09-06 ch 1,	abuse...Your ficcage has a tendency to break my heart, but only in the gentlest way possible.
deathrosekitty 2005-09-06 ch 1, anon.	abuse(claps hands) sad, but I loved it! I hope you write more!
Sintari 2005-09-06 ch 1,	abuseWell, the kicker line -- "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick" -- cut right through ME! All through the piece I was wondering what Neji's bad habit was, but I guess now we know. Such powers aren't always a gift, are they? This was extremely well done!

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