*sque!* squee squee squee! I love how you've captured impulsive!Josh. Oh so romantic and lovely!

I love, love, love this... Please tell me there is a sequel... Dont leave me hanging please... Please write a sequel...

JENNIFER

That was such a good start you can't just end it. I need an update! Go now post!

I can't get over how beautiful your writing is. Thank you, for this :)

Any chance of Donna's reaction when the skis arrive?

You get Josh

Great fic, I loved how josh choose to send a peace offering to her, I just hope that you will write a sequel with what happened after.

Update soon.

A cute little sojourn, and a nice job of keeping Donna in the piece while still off stage. I liked the idea, and the imagery was reasonable. Technically, it's a mess, especially in the typos: there was a really jarring "he" instead of "she" near the end, and some subs like "new" for "no" and "eventually' for "eventual."

Nice to see you writing something hopeful, but surprisingly sloppy mechanics took it down a few pegs. Enjoyed it anyway.

Always yours, M