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| BPhantom 2007-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseoh, nice. I love your use of words. ^.^ I think Smoker is a LITTLE OOC, but other than that, very nice! =D |
| mika 2006-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abusehawt. intense. well portrayed. excelent. alluring. entraping. so many ways to discribe this art- |
| Yuki Kokoro 2006-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo messed up but so them. The Ace/Smoker fandom needs some of this to remind us just how hard and abusive this relationship could be. I really liked this line: "Ace does not bring choice, he brings demands and distortion. I’m going to scream if I don’t hurt him soon." As well as: "reached this point where love and hate are the same ** thing." I think that thought is fascinating and although I don't think I can really imagine it I know in my little fangirl heart that if any couple in One Piece can do it it would be them. |
| queenKristen 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseIntense. I love it. |
| Cro 2005-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseNicely written, really like your style. The endig made me want to cry, cause in the back of my head i'm like "Wot, it's getting good" and then it ends. ;_;There isn't enough enough AxS fiction- let alone graphic fiction. |
| Angie-chan 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseTey're so disfunctional it hurts me a little... This pairing isn't really my thing, but I had to read it since you wrote it, and you're so good! ^^ Anyway, I like it, even though reading about the biting made my neck hurt.. |