 DoubleBinConnecticut 10/15/10 . chapter 1Thank You for writing this story. I've been looking for a story where one or both of Marty's parents figured out that he was the Marty that they met in 1955. I thought that both George and Doc Brown were in character.
I do like how George went to Doc Brown and found out about the time machine any everything else. I could definitely understand why Marty would be acting the way he was, especially when he remembers what his family use to be like; before he time travelled to 1955.
My favorite parts were when George told Doc Brown that he didn't want his son time travelling again. And, when George told Marty that they did go easy on him; when he set fire to the living room rug. Excellent Story. |
 twilightfanjm 12/6/09 . chapter 1I loved it! Especially the last line! |
 Taryn Streambattle 8/1/09 . chapter 1Hahahah! perfect ending! |
 FacetiousDruid 2/5/09 . chapter 1Do you think there is any way that you might be able to update this? I just read it and loved it. |
 Vintage Writer 1/28/07 . chapter 1This was a cute one shot. Great job on it. |
 emeraldeyegurl 5/3/06 . chapter 1wow! that last sentence was a bit funny. why don't you write a sequal to this? you can tell how Marty reacts to the last sentence by his dad. Maybe it can only be a family secret of time-travel. Maybe George and eventually let Marty time-travle again or himself too. well tell me what you think of this. thanks. bye. :-) |
 sarahofearth 12/11/05 . chapter 1Aw, that was cute. I loved the Marty nd George interction at the end. It was very relistic too. They didn't show the after experiences Marty having to deal with his new life. I'm glad you wrote this... Continue maybe? Lol. Keep up the awesome work!
Have a nice day,
-Sarah
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 ilovethestorys 12/4/05 . chapter 1good job. ilike it. sweet. |
 Rohan Bernett 11/18/05 . chapter 1I liked this story. Good work. I especially liked the ending, with George bringing up what Marty said to him at the dance.
Thumbs up! |
 Teri 11/11/05 . chapter 1Very nice! |
 Jarel Kortan 9/13/05 . chapter 1Hey good story, keep up the good work. Hope you continue it. |
 MiniBlackRaven 9/13/05 . chapter 1Hoha! That was good. |
 purpleroze 9/13/05 . chapter 1 the last line was the best. |
 LA Suka 9/12/05 . chapter 1It's only logical that Marty's parents would be worried about his odd behavior. I loved this! |
 Pip3 9/12/05 . chapter 1oh yay! i loved this!
i'd always wanted to read a story where his parents found out. i like this with his dad and talking to doc. nice story! |