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| MysticSorceror 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThings I liked: Love the title Nice imagery, great emotions You really captured Kyo's character - good job *wants to hug him* I like the character interactions I really like how much Kyoko can reach out to him Aww, I like that line: "You're a butterfly, you can fly wherever the hell you want" I can really get the drama from the last time with Kyoko Good way to end the chapter Nice work ~Myst Things that I didn't like: "just hanging in the air" - meant to be - just hung If this stays true to the manga I'd say Kyo was a little younger since the last time Kyo met with Kyoko was the hat incident which happened when Tohru was in the third or fourth grade. - I'm taking that it's not, especially with the last part "I sure she's lonely too" |
| -misunderstood-tomboy- 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Write more Jessie! Say hi to .Pyrite.Dragon. for me! !} |
| Fall Out Girl x3 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI guess I gotta read the story now *prints out* Ah, how sad I wrote the story with you and I haven't read the whole thing xD |
| smileyspiritprincess 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseoh this is just so sweet an sad, but filled with a sort of hope at the same time, I'd love to see a sequel- maybe kyo reflecting on what it was like when he -did- meet tohru. oh pleease you'd make me so happy :D *begs* |
| kitten chipmunk and squirre... 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuse-Chipmunk thinks that story was very sweet. =WHAT?! Chips, it's very KYOU. -Chipmunk asks that Squirrel keep his mouth shut. Chipmunk once again stresses the sweetness of the earlier scenes, and the butterflies. Chipmunk would also like to mention that the emotional scene with kyou was very well written. =We liked the bit where they thought kyou was kyoko's son! -Chipmunk yet again requests that Squirrel keep his mouth shut, although Chipmunk also enjoyed that part. |
| HarryPotterSweetie 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO SAD! *begins to cry* Really, it was sad, but it was really good! At first I didn't really wanna read it, cause it looked long and began with a lot of...imagery (Not that thats bad, it's good! I just didn't know if I wanted to read it. That's Missy for ya.) but it was really good! I liked it a lot. :) I wish we really knew what went on with Kyoko's death, cause we don't know if she was in a car or not, or much about it... Everyone was very much incharacter, which is good. ;) I love the title! 'Always Chasing Butterflies'...It has a cute sounding name, but it's sorta sad...Bittersweet. :) Good job Jesi and Candy~ Write more Furuba! xD ha ha xox Missy |